写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более правильные формы глаголов и избегать повторений. Также стоит строить предложения более логично и связно.

範例: No, I don't write much by hand because I mainly use my laptop and prefer typing. However, sometimes I have to write by hand, especially for university essays.

建議: Ответ нечеткий и содержит ошибки в лексике и грамматике. Следует давать более конкретные и связные ответы, избегать лишних слов и использовать правильные выражения.

範例: I like to write lecture notes because they help me memorize the material. I also write messages to my friend who lives in another region.

建議: Ответ очень непонятен из-за ошибок и отсутствия связности. Рекомендуется строить предложения полностью и логично, использовать подходящую лексику и избегать пауз и неуверенности.

範例: Yes, I think the things I write will change over time. In the future, I might write plans or reminders, but for now, I prefer writing short notes.

建議: Ответ содержит много пауз и грамматических ошибок. Следует строить предложения более плавно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Of course, since we live in a digital age, I prefer typing because it is much faster. Also, documents are available online, so I can open them on my phone or laptop. However, sometimes I write by hand.

× No, I don't try the word becauses mainly I use my laptop and I prefer typing.

✓ No, I don't try to write words because mainly I use my laptop and I prefer typing.

The phrase 'try the word' is incorrect; it should be 'try to write words' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The verb 'try' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'write'.

× But there of course sometimes when I have to ride by my hand.

✓ But of course, sometimes I have to write by hand.

The phrase 'ride by my hand' is incorrect; it should be 'write by hand'. Also, 'there of course sometimes' is awkward; 'of course, sometimes' is the correct word order. 'By hand' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate handwriting.

× Especially for our university essays.

✓ Especially for our university essays.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb; it should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to include a verb for completeness.

× I like to write some. Weather is for my friend that is live is living now. In another region.

✓ I like to write some. Whether it is for my friend who is living now in another region.

'Weather' is incorrect; it should be 'whether' to introduce a condition. 'That is live is living now' is incorrect; it should be 'who is living now'. The preposition 'in' is correctly used before 'another region'.

× Of course. It depends in time, maybe in the future I would. Ride plans and.

✓ Of course. It depends on time; maybe in the future I would write plans and.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'in'. 'Ride plans' is incorrect; it should be 'write plans'. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be completed properly.

× Uhm, maybe put ring? Why not? But now I prefer right like smaller size only.

✓ Uhm, maybe put writing? Why not? But now I prefer writing smaller pieces only.

'Put ring' is incorrect; likely intended 'put writing' or 'write'. 'Right' is a misspelling of 'write'. The phrase 'like smaller size only' is awkward; 'smaller pieces only' is clearer.

× Of course, as we live in digital age, I prefer typing.

✓ Of course, as we live in the digital age, I prefer typing.

The phrase 'digital age' requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× It's much faster and. Oh, documents on. Available online so you can. Open them on your phone or laptop.

✓ It's much faster, and documents are available online, so you can open them on your phone or laptop.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. They should be combined into a coherent sentence with appropriate verbs and conjunctions.

× But of course, sometimes I ride by my hand.

✓ But of course, sometimes I write by hand.

'Ride by my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write by hand' to indicate handwriting.