写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语句不够连贯，有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，保持语言自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I write a lot because I have heavy homework. As a law major, my teachers often assign essays about the legal system, so I need to write frequently.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱且有语法错误，建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子，并解释原因。

範例: Actually, I don't like writing very much because it requires a lot of patience and time to analyze the structure carefully.

建議: 回答不完整且语句不连贯，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子流畅，并具体说明变化的原因。

範例: Yes, the things I write do change, especially in law, because legal regulations are always updated to reflect changes in daily life.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和句式，表达更自然流畅。

範例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient, especially when I search online and can easily copy and paste information. Writing by hand can make my hands tired.

× My major is law and my teachers will.

✓ My major is law and my teachers usually

句中 'will' 用法不当，表示习惯动作应使用 'usually'，表示频率副词。

× Usually, uh, give us some homework about writing some essays about the legal system.

✓ Usually, uh, they give us some homework about writing some essays about the legal system.

缺少主语，且动词 'give' 需要与主语一致，且句子结构不完整。

× Well, actually I don't like to write I anything because.

✓ Well, actually I don't like to write anything because.

句中多余的 'I'，导致句子结构错误，应删除。

× Uhm, I guess I must so lazy and the only thing I want to do is raise but not right because right needs a lot of patience and lots of time for you to have to analyze the structure and.

✓ Uhm, I guess I am so lazy and the only thing I want to do is rest but not write because writing needs a lot of patience and lots of time for you to analyze the structure.

缺少动词 'am'，'raise' 用词错误，应为 'rest'，'right' 应为 'write'，且句子不完整，需补充完整。

× Especially when I. And do some writing about my major law.

✓ Especially when I do some writing about my major, law.

句子断裂，'And' 用法错误，应合并句子，且 'law' 前加逗号。

× You know that the legal stations always change and there is some changes in every arrow of daily life, so I have to change the.

✓ You know that the legal situations always change and there are some changes in every area of daily life, so I have to change them.

'stations' 应为 'situations'，'arrow' 应为 'area'，'there is' 应为 'there are'，且句子不完整，需补充。

× If I have two handwriting, I might feel very tired with my hands, so I prefer typing is very convenient.

✓ If I do handwriting, I might feel very tired in my hands, so I prefer typing because it is very convenient.

'have two handwriting' 用法错误，应为 'do handwriting'，'with my hands' 应为 'in my hands'，且句子结构不完整，需补充。