花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "a bucket, a bucket of rose" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use plural form "roses" when referring to multiple flowers. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really love flowers, especially roses. For example, when I graduated from my senior high school, my friends gave me a bucket of roses, which I still keep as a memorable gift.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing. Instead of "says my mother" use "my mother does." Also, "plays new kind of flower" is unclear; you likely mean "plants new kinds of flowers." Try to use linking words and provide a bit more detail to make your answer coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She often plants new kinds of flowers in our garden to keep it colorful and lively.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Avoid repeating phrases like "always playing it." Use the correct verb "plant" instead of "play." Also, try to be more specific and concise. Use linking words to improve flow and coherence.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers in my hometown. Although I don't know their names, I often see people planting them in front of their houses to decorate their homes.

建議: Your answer has some hesitation and redundancy. Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and repeated words. Also, complete your sentences clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your experience.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers. For example, yesterday on my way to school, I saw a flower with a lovely combination of white and pink colors, so I took a picture of it.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use plural "flowers" and avoid filler words like "uh" and "umm." Also, specify occasions clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts. They usually give them on special occasions like graduations, birthdays, and other celebrations.

× Yes, I do really love flowers, especially rose.

✓ Yes, I do really love flowers, especially roses.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' because it refers to flowers in general, which is a plural concept here.

× all my friends gave me bucket, a bucket of rose and I keep it until now for remembering that my friend gave me.

✓ all my friends gave me a bucket, a bucket of roses, and I have kept it until now to remember that my friends gave it to me.

The word 'bucket' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' because it refers to multiple flowers. Also, 'keep' should be 'have kept' to indicate the action started in the past and continues. 'For remembering' is incorrect; 'to remember' is the correct infinitive form. 'My friend' should be 'my friends' to agree with 'all my friends'.

× Yes, I do, says my mother.

✓ Yes, I do, my mother says.

The phrase 'says my mother' is incorrectly placed. The correct word order in English is subject + verb, so it should be 'my mother says'.

× And she loves flower very much and she always plays new kind of flower in the garden.

✓ And she loves flowers very much and she always plants new kinds of flowers in the garden.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. 'Plays' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'plants' when referring to gardening. 'New kind of flower' should be pluralized to 'new kinds of flowers' to indicate variety.

× but I always see, umm, some people always playing it, playing it in front of their home to decorate their home.

✓ but I always see, umm, some people always planting them in front of their homes to decorate their homes.

The verb 'playing' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'planting' when referring to flowers. Also, 'home' should be plural 'homes' to agree with 'some people'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural flowers.

× I always take a photo when I see the, the beautiful flowers uh, for example, yesterday when I went to my school, then I saw the beautiful flower.

✓ I always take a photo when I see the beautiful flowers. For example, yesterday when I went to my school, I saw a beautiful flower.

The first part is correct with 'flowers' plural. In the second sentence, 'the beautiful flower' should be 'a beautiful flower' because it is the first mention and singular.

× The color was uh, white and pink in, in combination and it was great and beautiful and I took.

✓ The color was, uh, white and pink in combination, and it was great and beautiful, so I took a photo.

The phrase 'in, in combination' should be 'in combination' without repetition. The sentence ends abruptly with 'I took'; it should specify what was taken, e.g., 'I took a photo.'

× because for them sending flower is a good gift for some people and they always give it when, uh, some people have graduated or umm, birthday party, something like that.

✓ because for them sending flowers is a good gift for some people and they always give them when, uh, some people have graduated or have a birthday party, something like that.

'Sending flower' should be 'sending flowers' plural. 'Give it' should be 'give them' to agree with plural 'flowers'. Also, 'birthday party' needs an article 'have a birthday party'.