花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn. Ví dụ, 'all of them is' nên là 'all of them are'. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'really'.

範例: Yes, I really love flowers because there are many types, and all of them are very beautiful. Moreover, the smell of flowers is pleasant, which I really enjoy.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'my mom really like' nên là 'my mom really likes'. Câu 'My mom is a world of many different flowers' không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, my mom loves flowers, especially roses. For example, she grows many different kinds of flowers in our garden.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'sell any flowers' nên là 'sell various flowers' và 'the different types and color' nên là 'different types and colors'. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, at the market, people sell various flowers with different types and colors, which is very beautiful.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'flowers is' nên là 'flowers are', 'I don't like take photos' nên là 'I don't like taking photos'. Hãy sử dụng câu nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

範例: No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life. Although flowers are very beautiful, I don't like taking photos, and as a student, I don't have enough time.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu rõ ràng, ví dụ 'send flowers to other' nên là 'send flowers to others', câu 'when you go to that' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others as gifts. For example, you can buy roses at the flower shop and give them to someone on special occasions.

× There are many types of flowers and all of them is really beautiful.

✓ There are many types of flowers and all of them are really beautiful.

The subject 'all of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× My mom really like flowers, especially rose, for example, in my garden.

✓ My mom really likes flowers, especially roses, for example, in my garden.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'My mom'. Also, 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when referring to flowers in general.

× My mom is a world of many different flowers.

✓ My mom has a world of many different flowers.

The phrase 'is a world' is incorrect here; 'has a world' or 'has many different flowers' is more appropriate. The original sentence is unclear and likely a misuse of expression.

× you can see people who sell any flowers with the different types and color.

✓ you can see people who sell many flowers with different types and colors.

'Any flowers' is incorrect in this positive statement; 'many flowers' is appropriate. Also, 'the different types and color' should be 'different types and colors' to match plural nouns.

× Although flowers is very beautiful, I don't like take photos and I'm a student so I don't have enough time.

✓ Although flowers are very beautiful, I don't like taking photos and I'm a student so I don't have enough time.

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'like take photos' should be 'like taking photos' to use the gerund form after 'like'.

× For example when you go to that you can buy a flowers like rose and send it to others.

✓ For example, when you go there you can buy flowers like roses and send them to others.

'Go to that' is incorrect; it should be 'go there'. 'A flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural; 'flowers' without 'a' is correct. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'flowers'. Also, 'send it' should be 'send them' to agree with plural 'flowers'.