花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, 'roaches' seems to be a mistake; you might mean 'roses'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, tulips, daisies, and sunflowers because they brighten up the room and give me cheerful vibes.

建議: Focus on grammar and clarity. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices like 'shameful' which doesn't fit here. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, one of my friends loves flowers because she has a gentle and lovely personality, and she enjoys decorating her room with many flowers.

建議: Correct vocabulary errors such as 'obsessions' which should be 'occasions'. Complete your sentences fully and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, flowers are very important in my country and are often used to celebrate special occasions. You won't see many flowers in Bangkok because it's a very busy city with limited green spaces. However, if you visit northern Thailand, you will find many beautiful flowers.

建議: Improve grammar and word choice; 'mode' should be 'mood', and 'photocopying' should be 'photographing'. Complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural.

範例: It depends on my mood at the time and how beautiful the flowers are. For example, if I come across some lavender, which I find very beautiful and calming, I will definitely take a photo to capture the moment. I enjoy photographing flowers because they brighten up my day and remind me of nature's beauty.

建議: Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace 'obsessions' with 'occasions' and 'Valentine days' with 'Valentine's Day'. Clarify 'branch of flowers' or use a better phrase. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: Yes, especially on special occasions, celebrations, and even on Valentine's Day. Flowers are very popular in my country, particularly bouquets.

× Yes, I love flowers, especially roaches, tulips, daisies and sunflowers because they are lighten up the room and give me some cheerful vibes and lovely.

✓ Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, tulips, daisies and sunflowers because they lighten up the room and give me some cheerful vibes and loveliness.

The phrase 'they are lighten up' is incorrect because 'lighten' should be in the base form to agree with the plural subject 'they' and to form the present simple tense. Also, 'roaches' is likely a typo for 'roses'. 'Lovely' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'loveliness' to fit the sentence structure.

× Yes, one of my friends, she's also love flowers because I think she she has the personality that quite shameful and lovely and she loves decorating her room with the many flowers.

✓ Yes, one of my friends, she also loves flowers because I think she has a personality that is quite shy and lovely and she loves decorating her room with many flowers.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. The repeated 'she' is a redundancy and should be removed. 'Shameful' is incorrect in this context; 'shy' is the appropriate adjective. 'The many flowers' should be 'many flowers' without 'the'.

× Yes, flowers are very important in my country and often used to celebrate special obsessions. You won't see many flowers in Bangkok because it's very busy city with limited green spaces. However, if you visit northern Thailand you will find many beautiful.

✓ Yes, flowers are very important in my country and are often used to celebrate special occasions. You won't see many flowers in Bangkok because it's a very busy city with limited green spaces. However, if you visit northern Thailand, you will find many beautiful ones.

'Obsessions' is incorrect; the correct word is 'occasions'. The phrase 'very busy city' needs the article 'a'. The sentence 'you will find many beautiful' is incomplete; it should be 'many beautiful ones' to refer to flowers.

× It depends on my mode at the time and how you need the flowers are. For example, if I come across some lavenders which I find very beautiful and calming, I will definitely take a photo to capture the moment. I enjoy photocopying flowers because they brighten up my day and remind me of.

✓ It depends on my mood at the time and how nice the flowers are. For example, if I come across some lavender which I find very beautiful and calming, I will definitely take a photo to capture the moment. I enjoy photographing flowers because they brighten up my day and remind me of happy times.

'Mode' should be 'mood'. 'How you need the flowers are' is incorrect; it should be 'how nice the flowers are'. 'Lavenders' should be 'lavender' as an uncountable noun. 'Photocopying' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'photographing'. The phrase 'remind me of' is incomplete and needs an object.

× Yes, especially in the special obsessions or celebrating or even the Valentine days. The flowers were very popular in my country, especially the branch of flowers.

✓ Yes, especially on special occasions, celebrations, or even Valentine's Day. Flowers are very popular in my country, especially certain types of flowers.

'Obsessions' should be 'occasions'. 'Valentine days' should be 'Valentine's Day'. 'The flowers were very popular' suggests past tense, but the context implies a general truth, so present tense 'are' is appropriate. 'The branch of flowers' is unclear; 'certain types of flowers' is clearer.