花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“my when my boyfriend bought me rose”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they make me feel happy. For example, when my boyfriend gives me roses, I feel very cheerful.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“sweet sand”应为“sweet scent”。建议注意单词拼写和搭配，使用正确的词汇表达具体细节。

範例: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. For example, she often buys lilies for our living room because their sweet scent makes us feel relaxed and happy.

建議: 回答没有直接回答问题，偏离了主题。建议直接回答是否有很多花，并简洁说明原因，避免语法错误，如“since I living alone”应为“since I live alone”。

範例: There are many flowers around where I live, but I don't buy any because I live alone and am too busy to take care of them.

建議: 回答较为自然，但“record it”用词不当，建议使用更合适的表达如“take photos”。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Actually, I occasionally take photos of flowers. For example, when I receive beautiful flowers from my parents or boyfriend, I like to take pictures of them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“commemorate of”应为“commemorate”，以及时态错误“will bought”应为“buys”。建议注意语法时态和介词使用，表达更准确。

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others to celebrate various festivals and anniversaries. For example, my father buys flowers for my mother every June 6 because it is their wedding anniversary.

× Yes, absolutely, because the flowers will make me full of pleasure.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because the flowers make me full of pleasure.

这里不需要使用将来时态的情态动词“will”，因为表达的是一种普遍事实或习惯。应使用一般现在时。

× For example my when my boyfriend bought me rose, I will feel cheerful.

✓ For example, when my boyfriend bought me a rose, I felt cheerful.

“rose”是可数名词，单数时需要冠词“a”。另外，句子时态应与上下文一致，描述过去发生的事情应使用过去时。

× Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. For example, she will buy some Lily in our living room because the sweet sand will make our relaxed and cheerful.

✓ Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. For example, she will buy some lilies for our living room because the sweet scent will make us relaxed and cheerful.

“Lily”应使用复数形式“lilies”，表示多朵百合花。句中“sand”应为“scent”，意为香味。代词“our”后应接形容词或名词，这里应为“us”表示“使我们感到”。

× To be honest, I don't buy flowers since I living alone because I have lots of work that I need to deal with so I don't have time to take care of them.

✓ To be honest, I don't buy flowers since I live alone because I have lots of work that I need to deal with, so I don't have time to take care of them.

“living”应改为动词原形“live”，因为前面有助动词“do”构成一般现在时。

× Actually, I take photos of flowers occasionally. When I receive beautiful flowers from my parents or my boyfriend, then I will record it.

✓ Actually, I take photos of flowers occasionally. When I receive beautiful flowers from my parents or my boyfriend, I record them.

“then I will record it”中的“will”不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。且“flowers”为复数，代词应为“them”。

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others in order to commemorate of all kinds of festivals and anniversaries. For example, my father will bought some flowers for my mother every June 6 because that day was their wedding anniversary.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others in order to commemorate all kinds of festivals and anniversaries. For example, my father buys some flowers for my mother every June 6 because that day is their wedding anniversary.

“commemorate of”中“of”多余，应去掉。句中“will bought”时态错误，应为一般现在时“buys”，因为描述习惯动作。最后一句应使用一般现在时“is”，表示事实。