花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally natural and relevant, but it is a bit redundant and slightly long. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because their sweet smell gives me a sense of peace and relaxation whenever I smell them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear at the end. Avoid informal expressions like 'See' and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: Yes, my mother loves receiving flowers because she finds them beautiful and they brighten her mood. She is probably the most passionate person I know about flowers.

建議: Your answer has good content but some vocabulary is incorrect or unclear (e.g., 'cheese', 'main'). Avoid filler phrases like 'I don't know' and try to use correct plant names. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My mother plants various flowers like roses, daisies, and marigolds in our courtyard. Sometimes, I water them in my free time, which helps me feel relaxed.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Avoid repeating phrases like 'to taking to take'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and concise.

範例: Yes, as a photographer, I enjoy capturing different kinds of flowers on my phone and sharing these photos on Instagram and other social media platforms.

建議: Your answer is informative but has some repetition and minor errors (e.g., 'eat' instead of 'Eid'). Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to family and friends on birthdays and religious occasions like Christmas, Puja, and Eid. Flowers symbolize love and respect, so giving them is very important.

× I love flowers because of their sweet smell.

✓ I love flowers because of their sweet smell.

No correction needed here as the preposition 'because of' is correctly used to indicate the reason.

× I feel like they give me a sense of peace and I feel relaxed whenever I smell any flowers.

✓ I feel like they give me a sense of peace and I feel relaxed whenever I smell flowers.

The word 'any' is unnecessary here; 'smell flowers' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× See, she always becomes really excited whenever someone gives her a bouquet because she finds flowers beautiful and brighten her up too.

✓ See, she always becomes really excited whenever someone gives her a bouquet because she finds flowers beautiful and they brighten her up too.

The conjunction 'and' connects two clauses; the second clause needs a subject 'they' to be grammatically correct.

× In fact, she is probably the most passionate person I know when it comes to.

✓ In fact, she is probably the most passionate person I know when it comes to flowers.

The sentence is incomplete and requires an object after 'comes to' to make sense.

× I actually live in a house with courtyards and my mother always planned variety of flowers, right?

✓ I actually live in a house with courtyards and my mother always plants a variety of flowers, right?

'Variety' needs an article 'a' before it and the verb 'planned' should be 'plants' to indicate habitual action.

× Like rose, cheese, main and other types of plant.

✓ Like roses, daisies, mint, and other types of plants.

The original words 'cheese' and 'main' are incorrect plant names; correct plant names and plural forms are needed here.

× Sometimes whenever I get spare time, I go to that garden and water those plants.

✓ Sometimes whenever I get spare time, I go to the garden and water the plants.

Using 'that' and 'those' is less natural here; 'the' is more appropriate for known places and objects.

× I am actually a photographer so I always want to capture varieties of flowers on my phone because I love doing this and it is one of my hobby to taking to take pictures of flowers on my phone and add this to my Instagram or any social media.

✓ I am actually a photographer, so I always want to capture various flowers on my phone because I love doing this and it is one of my hobbies to take pictures of flowers on my phone and add them to my Instagram or other social media.

'Varieties of flowers' should be 'various flowers'; 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies'; 'to taking to take' is incorrect and should be 'to take'; 'this' should be 'them' referring to pictures; 'any social media' should be 'other social media.'

× Yes, of course, in my country, people often send flowers to their families and friends on the occasion of their birthdays and different types of religious occasions like Christmas, puja and eat.

✓ Yes, of course, in my country, people often send flowers to their families and friends on the occasion of their birthdays and different types of religious occasions like Christmas, Puja, and Eid.

'Puja' and 'Eid' are proper nouns and should be capitalized; 'eat' is a typo and should be 'Eid.'

× So people present them to express their loves and respect towards them.

✓ So people present them to express their love and respect towards others.

'Loves' should be singular 'love'; 'them' at the end is ambiguous and should be replaced with 'others' to clarify the object of respect.