花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use plural 'flowers' and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they make me feel relaxed and peaceful. For example, when I see colorful flowers, it creates a cozy atmosphere that helps me unwind.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has pronoun confusion. Try to structure your sentence clearly with correct pronouns and avoid vague expressions like 'feels the smile of the flower.'

範例: Yes, my cousin loves flowers. She enjoys looking at them, especially their vibrant colors, which always make her happy.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and incomplete ideas. Use correct plural forms and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because it's a residential area with many buildings. However, I have planted some flowers on my terrace.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammar issues. Try to clarify your meaning and use proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but when I feel peaceful and relaxed, I like to take pictures of the beautiful flowers on my terrace.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like weddings, to congratulate someone on their achievements, and especially on Valentine's Day.

× Obviously I love flower and I see flower.

✓ Obviously I love flowers and I see flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the speaker is talking about flowers in general, not a single flower.

× It's give me kind of relaxation and I love it.

✓ It gives me kind of relaxation and I love it.

The verb 'give' must be conjugated as 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'It' in the third person singular form.

× Yes, of course I know who loves flowers is my cousin.

✓ Yes, of course I know who loves flowers; it is my cousin.

The sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. Adding a semicolon and the pronoun 'it' clarifies the subject referring to 'my cousin'.

× She loves to see and he loves the color of the flower and she always feels the smile of the flower.

✓ She loves to see flowers, she loves the color of the flowers, and she always feels the smile of the flowers.

The pronoun 'he' is inconsistent with 'she' referring to the same person. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× No, they're not lot of flower because I live in a local residential area and there's more building but I planned on my terrace and they're kind of.

✓ No, there are not a lot of flowers because I live in a local residential area and there are more buildings, but I have plants on my terrace and there are some kinds.

'They're not lot of flower' is incorrect; it should be 'there are not a lot of flowers' to match plural form and correct 'there is/are' usage. 'Building' should be plural 'buildings'. 'Planned' is incorrect; 'have plants' fits better. 'They're kind of' is incomplete and unclear.

× Frequently I don't take picture in daily when my mood is very peaceful and relaxed, I like to click the beautiful flowers which on my terrace.

✓ Frequently, I don't take pictures daily, but when my mood is very peaceful and relaxed, I like to click beautiful flowers on my terrace.

'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the context. 'In daily' is incorrect; 'daily' alone is sufficient. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yeah, of course. In our country people obtain sing flower when they go for any wedding or when they congratulate someone for the work, anything else and and and the Valentine's Day give each other flowers.

✓ Yeah, of course. In our country, people give single flowers when they go to any wedding or when they congratulate someone for their work, or on Valentine's Day, people give each other flowers.

'Obtain sing flower' is incorrect; 'give single flowers' is appropriate. 'Go for any wedding' should be 'go to any wedding'. 'Congratulate someone for the work' should be 'congratulate someone for their work'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.