花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it can be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy like 'I just love flowers' and 'I'm a nature lover' which convey similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they help me feel relaxed. For instance, I grow many flowers in my backyard, and seeing them always refreshes my mind.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use correct pronouns and verb forms, and link your ideas smoothly. Also, specify the types of flowers clearly and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She grows various kinds such as lotus, rose, and hibiscus in our backyard, and she takes great care of them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and clearer sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases like 'fond of parks and gardens' and be more specific about the environment. Also, correct grammar such as 'the village is' and 'I like it most' to 'I like that the flowers are well maintained.'

範例: I live in a village that has many parks and gardens, so there are plenty of flowers around. Moreover, the flowers are regularly watered and well maintained, which I really appreciate.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I take photos' twice. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers early in the morning and use them as wallpapers on my phone because they refresh my mind and help reduce stress.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using plural forms correctly and more precise vocabulary. For example, say 'send flowers to people' and specify occasions clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some type of party or occasions.'

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others to express love, appreciation, or to celebrate special occasions like birthdays and weddings.

× As far I am concerned, I know a person, he is my mother.

✓ As far as I am concerned, I know a person; she is my mother.

The phrase 'As far I am concerned' is missing the preposition 'as' after 'far'. Also, 'he' is incorrectly used to refer to 'my mother', which should be 'she' as it refers to a female.

× My mother always loves flowers and he has grown a lot of flowers of different breeds like Lotus, rose and hibiscus in our backyard and he take a full care of them.

✓ My mother always loves flowers and she has grown a lot of flowers of different breeds like lotus, rose, and hibiscus in our backyard and she takes full care of them.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used for 'my mother'; it should be 'she'. Also, 'he take' is incorrect; the verb should be 'takes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Additionally, 'Lotus' should be lowercase unless it is a proper noun, and commas are needed in the list.

× I just love flowers. Well I'm a nature lover and I've grown a lot of flowers in my backyard of my home and whenever I see flowers I feel stress free and refreshed.

✓ I just love flowers. Well, I'm a nature lover and I've grown a lot of flowers in the backyard of my home, and whenever I see flowers, I feel stress-free and refreshed.

The phrase 'in my backyard of my home' is awkward; 'in the backyard of my home' is more natural. Also, commas are needed after introductory words and clauses. 'Stress free' should be hyphenated as 'stress-free' when used as an adjective.

× Well to be honest, I live in a village and village is fond of parks and gardens so there are a plethora of flowers in there.

✓ Well, to be honest, I live in a village and the village is fond of parks and gardens, so there is a plethora of flowers there.

A comma is needed after 'Well'. 'Village' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific village. 'There are a plethora of flowers in there' is incorrect because 'plethora' is singular, so 'there is' is correct, and 'in there' is redundant; 'there' suffices.

× There is a regular maintenance of flowers and regular watering and I like it most.

✓ There is regular maintenance of the flowers and regular watering, and I like it the most.

'A regular maintenance' is incorrect because 'maintenance' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'the flowers' is more specific. 'I like it most' should be 'I like it the most' for correct superlative usage.

× Without any doubt, I usually take photos of flowers whenever there is an early morning and I take photos of different flowers and use it as a wallpaper for for my phone because whenever I see flowers it, it gives me some type of refreshment to my mind and uplifts my stress.

✓ Without any doubt, I usually take photos of flowers early in the morning, and I take photos of different flowers and use them as wallpaper for my phone because whenever I see flowers, they give me some type of refreshment for my mind and uplift my stress.

'Whenever there is an early morning' is incorrect; 'early in the morning' is the correct phrase. 'Use it' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural; it should be 'use them'. The repeated 'for' is a typo. 'Whenever I see flowers it, it gives' has misplaced commas and pronouns; 'they give' is correct as 'flowers' is plural. 'Refreshment to my mind' should be 'refreshment for my mind'. 'Uplifts my stress' is better as 'uplift my stress' to agree with plural subject 'they'.

× Well, I personally believe that people in my country usually give flowers to person for love, appreciation or some type of party or occasions.

✓ Well, I personally believe that people in my country usually give flowers to a person for love, appreciation, or some type of party or occasion.

'To person' is missing the article 'a'. 'Party or occasions' is inconsistent in number; it should be 'party or occasion' to match singular 'some type of'. Also, commas are needed in the list for clarity.