花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they are a beautiful way to express affection. I enjoy both receiving and giving flowers to my loved ones as a symbol of love.

建議: Improve coherence by using linking words and make your supporting details more specific. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'so many people' and provide examples or reasons.

範例: Yes, many people I know, including my friends and family, love flowers because they brighten up any space and convey heartfelt emotions.

建議: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and providing clearer explanations. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: There aren't many flowers near my house because the environment is quite dusty and sandy, which makes it difficult for flowers to grow.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words and be more specific about the types of flowers you photograph.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I see beautiful ones on the street, especially white flowers like lilies, which I find very attractive.

建議: Make your answer more natural and specific by giving examples of occasions when people send flowers. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers during special occasions like weddings and holidays to express love and gratitude.

× Yes, I like to receive flowers as a gift from my loved ones and I also like to send flowers as gifts for others if flowers is a great way to express our love to others.

✓ Yes, I like to receive flowers as gifts from my loved ones and I also like to send flowers as gifts to others because flowers are a great way to express our love to others.

The word 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'as a gift' should be plural 'as gifts' to match 'flowers'. The sentence structure was improved for clarity and correctness.

× So many people around me love flowers, many friends, colleagues and family members. The flowers are attractive and it is a precious emotional gift to be received.

✓ So many people around me love flowers, including many friends, colleagues, and family members. Flowers are attractive and are precious emotional gifts to receive.

'The flowers' is changed to 'Flowers' to generalize the statement. 'It is' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so 'are' is used. Also, 'gift' is pluralized to 'gifts' to match 'flowers'. The sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Not too much flowers around my house, however there is a lot of dust and sand all around my country.

✓ Not too many flowers around my house; however, there is a lot of dust and sand all around my country.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'flowers' is countable plural, so 'many' is correct. A semicolon and comma are added for better sentence structure.

× Yes, I usually take flowers while walking in the street and encountering any visually nice looking flowers I see myself attracted to, Specially some kind of flowers that locks white in color.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of flowers while walking in the street and encountering any visually nice-looking flowers I find attractive, especially some kinds of flowers that look white in color.

The verb 'take' needs an object, so 'photos of flowers' is added. 'Locks' is incorrect; it should be 'look'. 'Specially' is corrected to 'especially'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, some people in my country usually express their love and thankful moments by exchanging flowers.

✓ Yes, some people in my country usually express their love and gratitude by exchanging flowers.

'Thankful moments' is incorrect; 'gratitude' is the correct noun to express thankfulness. The preposition 'by' is correctly used here, so no change needed there.