花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免语法错误和冗余表达，例如“which always make her happy”应改为“which always makes her happy”。同时，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达。

範例: I really love roses. Every Valentine's Day, I give my girlfriend a bunch of roses to show my love, and it always makes her happy.

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“who loves who love flowers”应简化为“who love flowers”。建议回答更简洁，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Actually, I don't know many people who love flowers because my friends think they are not very practical. Most people only use them on special occasions like Valentine's Day or weddings.

建議: 回答较好，但有重复词汇“to to”，应注意语法和拼写错误。可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, definitely. Near my apartment, there is a huge park where people can grow their own flowers. This event encourages people to hang out together and makes the park very beautiful.

建議: 回答自然且内容具体，但“Mostly I will”表达不够地道，建议使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I see some that I haven't seen before. I think photographing them is a great way to capture their beauty and elegance.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“Yes, certainly. Yes.”和“is a very is a little bit”。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意句子结构。

範例: Yes, certainly. Sending flowers is a traditional way to congratulate people in our country. However, it can be quite expensive for us.

× Actually, I don't know many people who loves who love flowers because my friends, my friends think they are not very practical and most people only use them on special occasions like Valentine's Day or weddings.

✓ Actually, I don't know many people who love flowers because my friends think they are not very practical and most people only use them on special occasions like Valentine's Day or weddings.

这里的关系代词who指代的是复数people，所以谓语动词应该用复数形式love，而不是单数loves。

× Actually, I don't know many people who loves who love flowers because my friends, my friends think they are not very practical and most people only use them on special occasions like Valentine's Day or weddings.

✓ Actually, I don't know many people who love flowers because my friends think they are not very practical and most people only use them on special occasions like Valentine's Day or weddings.

句中重复使用了"who loves who love"，造成语义和结构混乱，应删除多余部分，使句子通顺。

× Near my apartment there is a huge park where people can grow their own flowers.

✓ Near my apartment, there is a huge park where people can grow their own flowers.

在句首的状语短语后面应加逗号，表示停顿，使句子结构更清晰。

× This is a special event in our city because it encourages people to to hang out together and make the park very beautiful.

✓ This is a special event in our city because it encourages people to hang out together and make the park very beautiful.

句中出现了重复的to，应删除多余的to，使表达正确。

× Yes, certainly. Yes. I think sending flowers in our country is a very traditional way to congratulate people. And however, I think sending flowers is a very is a little bit high-priced for us.

✓ Yes, certainly. I think sending flowers in our country is a very traditional way to congratulate people. However, I think sending flowers is a little bit high-priced for us.

"And however"是错误的连接词搭配，应使用单一连接词"However"，且句子中"is a very is a little bit"重复，应删除多余部分。