花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains several pronunciation and vocabulary errors, such as 'Varis' instead of 'flowers' and 'Farrah' which is unclear. Try to use correct vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers very much because they always make me happy. There are many different types, and I find each of them beautiful.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid confusing phrases. Provide specific details about your mom's love for flowers and her dream.

範例: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. She often buys them without any special reason, and she dreams of owning a flower shop one day.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and separate ideas clearly. Also, distinguish between flowers and other plants for clarity.

範例: Yes, I live outside the city where I have a garden. We grow different types of flowers like roses, as well as vegetables and fruit trees such as tomatoes and lemons.

建議: Your answer has grammar errors and a confusing word 'virus' instead of 'flowers'. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary. Also, explain why you enjoy taking photos of flowers.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I see them and upload these pictures on my social media. Seeing different flowers makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'buy far'. Try to use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, provide specific examples of occasions when flowers are given.

範例: In my country, people usually send flowers on special occasions like birthdays or Valentine's Day, especially to their partners. However, sending flowers is not very common on ordinary days.

× Yes, I always taking photos of flowers when I walk by them and also I will upload on my social media.

✓ Yes, I am always taking photos of flowers when I walk by them and also I will upload them on my social media.

The verb 'taking' needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'I am always taking'. Also, 'upload' requires an object, so 'them' (referring to photos) should be added.

× Yes 'cause my home is not near to the city so where I can have a garden outside and we usually will put different types of plants and flower outside a garden like rose or others vegetables, trees like tomato trees or lemon trees.

✓ Yes, because my home is not near the city, so I can have a garden outside and we usually put different types of plants and flowers outside the garden like roses or other vegetables, trees like tomato trees or lemon trees.

The preposition 'near' does not require 'to' after it. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'types'. 'Others vegetables' should be 'other vegetables'. 'Outside a garden' should be 'outside the garden' for specificity.

× Yes, I do love Varis very much 'cause Varys can always make me happy in every moment and because Farrah has many different types of of it and each of them are very beautiful I think.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers very much because flowers can always make me happy at every moment and because flowers have many different types and each of them is very beautiful, I think.

'Varis' and 'Varys' seem to be misspellings of 'flowers'. 'Types of of it' should be 'types of them' or 'types of flowers'. 'Each of them are' should be 'each of them is' because 'each' is singular.

× Yes, I know that my mom is the farthest fear her friends to tell me and she has a dream that she wants to own her flower shop in the future and also in their life she always bought many flowers with with no reasons.

✓ Yes, I know that my mom is the farthest from her friends to tell me and she has a dream that she wants to own her flower shop in the future and also in her life she has always bought many flowers with no reason.

'Farthest fear her friends to tell me' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'farthest from her friends to tell me' is more appropriate. 'In their life' should be 'in her life' to match the subject. 'Always bought' should be 'has always bought' to indicate an action continuing to the present. 'With with no reasons' should be 'with no reason'.

× But usually we didn't buy far.

✓ But usually we don't buy flowers.

'Didn't buy far' is incorrect; likely intended 'don't buy flowers'. The verb tense should be present simple 'don't buy' to match 'usually'. 'Far' is incorrect here; 'flowers' is the correct noun.