花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时句子结构不够清晰，表达重复且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I love flowers. Sometimes I buy a flower and place it on my desk. Seeing it always makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更准确的词汇。

範例: Yes, my roommate loves flowers. She often puts fresh flowers on her desk, which brightens her day after long working hours. Seeing flowers always makes her happy.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和拼写错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达感受。

範例: I live in a university dormitory, and our campus has many kinds of flowers. Walking around the campus helps me relax because the flowers create a pleasant atmosphere.

建議: 回答中用词不当且句子结构混乱，影响表达效果。建议使用简单明了的句子，准确表达拍照的原因和感受。

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers on campus. Looking at these photos reminds me of the beauty of the world and lifts my mood.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，表达更自然。

範例: Yes, many people in my country send flowers on special occasions like Valentine's Day and Mother's Day. Vendors sell flowers at stations, and people buy them to show their love and care.

× every time I saw my flowers I saw the flower I buy.

✓ every time I see my flowers I see the flower I buy.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时，表示习惯动作，所以动词也应使用一般现在时。将过去时'saw'改为现在时'see'。

× I hope this.

✓ I hope so.

表达希望时，通常用'hope so'，'hope this'不符合英语习惯。

× She usually plays some fresh flowers on her tables that will brighten up her day after.

✓ She usually places some fresh flowers on her table that brighten up her day afterwards.

动词'plays'用错，应为'places'或'puts'。'tables'应为单数'table'，因为通常指她的桌子。'after'应改为副词形式'afterwards'。

× Every time she saw flowers she will become very happy.

✓ Every time she sees flowers she becomes very happy.

时间状语'every time'表示习惯动作，应使用一般现在时，故将'saw'改为'sees'，'will become'改为一般现在时'becomes'。

× there is a lot of different kind of flowers

✓ there are a lot of different kinds of flowers

主语是复数'kinds'，谓语动词应用复数'are'。'kind'应为复数形式'kinds'，'of flowers'前应加复数形式。

× every time I wander in the campus I will feel unwind

✓ every time I wander around the campus I feel relaxed

'wander'后应接介词'around'表示在周围走动。'feel unwind'不正确，应为'feel relaxed'。

× these flowers will bring me good moons.

✓ these flowers will bring me good moods.

'moons'应为'moods'，表示心情。

× I do take a lot of photos of those blessings in my campus

✓ I do take a lot of photos of those blossoms on my campus

'blessings'应为'blossoms'，意为花朵。'in my campus'应为'on my campus'。

× that will remind how beautiful the world is and lived my moon up.

✓ that reminds me how beautiful the world is and lifts my mood up.

'will remind'改为一般现在时'reminds'，因为是习惯性动作。'lived my moon up'错误，应为'lifts my mood up'。

× You will see a lot of vendors in the men's station that you could buy the flowers and send it to the your lover or your mother

✓ You will see a lot of vendors at the men's station where you can buy flowers and send them to your lover or your mother

'in the men's station'应为'at the men's station'。'that you could buy'改为'where you can buy'更合适。'send it'应为'send them'，因为flowers是复数。'the your lover'中'the'多余，应去掉。

× which means that you care care about it.

✓ which means that you care about them.

'care care'重复，应去掉一个。'it'指代复数'flowers'，应改为'them'。