花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has good content but needs to be more fluent and clear. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct vocabulary, for example, 'fragments' should be 'fragrance'. Also, complete your examples properly and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors brighten my day. I especially admire the fragrance of roses, which creates a pleasant atmosphere around me.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using correct grammar and linking words for coherence. For example, use 'a friend' instead of 'a one friend' and connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I have a friend who really loves flowers. Whenever she sees beautiful flowers, she immediately buys them to decorate her home. Moreover, she usually spends her time gardening and taking care of plants and flowers.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know'.

範例: Yes, there are many beautiful flowers where I live because my mom usually does gardening. She takes care of different varieties of plants and flowers, such as roses and marigolds, which are very colorful and pleasant.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs better vocabulary and sentence structure. Replace 'fragments' with 'fragrance' and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, avoid filler words like 'yeah'.

範例: Yes, I usually take photos of blooming flowers because they give me inner peace and calmness. The colors and fragrance of the flowers are very admirable, so I enjoy photographing them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using correct grammar and more natural phrasing. For example, say 'sending flowers has become very popular' and use linking words for clarity.

範例: Yes, these days, sending flowers has become very popular, especially among young people. Exchanging flowers and giving them as gifts is a common trend.

× I do love flowers uh, because they're vibrant colors, uh, brightens my uh, day.

✓ I do love flowers uh, because they have vibrant colors, uh, brighten my uh, day.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'brighten' instead of 'brightens' to agree in number. Also, 'they're vibrant colors' is incorrect because 'they' refers to flowers, not colors. It should be 'they have vibrant colors'.

× I especially admire, uh, the fragments from the flowers, uh, which uh, produce the pleasant uh atmosphere around me.

✓ I especially admire, uh, the fragrance from the flowers, uh, which uh, produces a pleasant uh atmosphere around me.

The word 'fragments' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fragrance' when referring to the smell of flowers. Also, 'produce the pleasant atmosphere' should be 'produces a pleasant atmosphere' because 'fragrance' is singular and requires singular verb and article.

× For example, the Saint of the roses are very.

✓ For example, the scent of the roses is very pleasant.

The phrase 'Saint of the roses' is incorrect; it should be 'scent of the roses'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks an adjective to describe the scent. Correcting the sentence structure and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I have a one friend who really loves flower very much.

✓ Yes, I have one friend who really loves flowers very much.

'A one friend' is incorrect; 'one friend' is sufficient. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general.

× Whenever she sees the flowers, immediately buys them to decorate her home.

✓ Whenever she sees flowers, she immediately buys them to decorate her home.

The sentence lacks a subject before 'immediately buys'. Adding 'she' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× She also usually spends her time in gardening and taking care of the plants and flowers.

✓ She also usually spends her time gardening and taking care of the plants and flowers.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary after 'spends her time'. The correct phrase is 'spends her time gardening'.

× Yes, there are many beautiful flowers. So I live because my mom usually does gardening works and they should take care of different varieties of the plants and flowers such as roses and marigolds with, you know, pleasants, which are very pleasant and colorful.

✓ Yes, there are many beautiful flowers. I live here because my mom usually does gardening work and she takes care of different varieties of plants and flowers such as roses and marigolds, which are very pleasant and colorful.

'Gardening works' is incorrect; 'gardening work' is uncountable. 'They should take care' is incorrect; it should be 'she takes care' to agree with 'my mom'. 'Pleasants' is incorrect and unnecessary; possibly a mishearing of 'plants'.

× Yes, I usually take photos of the blooming flowers because it gives me a inner peace and the calmness.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the blooming flowers because they give me inner peace and calmness.

'It' is singular but refers to 'photos' or 'flowers' which are plural, so 'they' is correct. 'A inner peace' is incorrect; 'inner peace' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× Yeah, the color of the flowers are very admirable and their fragments are also very commendable, so I love taking flowers of.

✓ Yeah, the colors of the flowers are very admirable and their fragrances are also very commendable, so I love taking photos of flowers.

'Color' should be plural 'colors' to agree with 'flowers'. 'Fragments' is incorrect; 'fragrances' is correct. 'Taking flowers of' is incorrect; it should be 'taking photos of flowers'.

× Yes, these days sending flowers have been very popular and especially among the young groups, exchanging of the flowers and giving the flowers as a gift has been a trend.

✓ Yes, these days sending flowers has been very popular, especially among young groups. Exchanging flowers and giving flowers as gifts has been a trend.

'Sending flowers have been' is incorrect; 'sending flowers has been' is correct because 'sending' is singular. 'Exchanging of the flowers' is incorrect; 'exchanging flowers' is correct. 'Giving the flowers as a gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match 'flowers'.