花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I love flowers very much. My favorites are lilies, sunflowers, and roses, which I often keep in my bedroom. When I was a child, my mother used to teach me how to take care of flowers, so I have loved them since then.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers, my mother. When I was a child, she always taught me how to plant flowers, especially roses, because gardening is her hobby.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. At home, we have lilies, sunflowers, and roses because my mother loves gardening and spends her free time taking care of the plants.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn đúng cách và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Definitely, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because it helps me reduce stress. Also, I want to keep memorable moments of the beautiful flowers I see.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn đúng, tránh lỗi số nhiều và hoàn thiện câu trả lời để rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because they are beautiful and affordable. For example, on my birthday, my parents always give me a rose because they think it suits me well.

× I enjoy flowers, especially Lily, sunflower and rose in my bedroom are decorate a lot of roads in the table.

✓ I enjoy flowers, especially lilies, sunflowers, and roses in my bedroom, and they decorate a lot of roads on the table.

The nouns 'Lily', 'sunflower', and 'rose' should be pluralized to 'lilies', 'sunflowers', and 'roses' because the sentence refers to multiple flowers. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; adding conjunctions and prepositions clarifies meaning.

× When I was a child my mother always touched me playing any flower.

✓ When I was a child, my mother always taught me to play with flowers.

The verb 'touched' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'taught' which is the past tense of 'teach'. Also, 'playing any flower' is incorrect; it should be 'to play with flowers'.

× the person I know who loves flower is my mother because when I was a child she always teach me to plant flowers, especially rose because rose is her hobby.

✓ The person I know who loves flowers is my mother because when I was a child she always taught me to plant flowers, especially roses because roses are her hobby.

'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. 'teach' should be past tense 'taught'. 'rose' should be plural 'roses' and 'rose is' should be 'roses are' to agree in number.

× In my home it has a lot of flowers including Lily, sunflower and rose because my mother is a green town and then she always playing flower when she has a free time.

✓ In my home, there are a lot of flowers including lilies, sunflowers, and roses because my mother is a green thumb and she always plays with flowers when she has free time.

'Lily, sunflower and rose' should be pluralized. 'it has' is incorrect; 'there are' is correct for plural. 'green town' is a wrong phrase; the correct idiom is 'green thumb'. 'she always playing' should be 'she always plays'.

× she always playing flower when she has a free time.

✓ she always plays with flowers when she has free time.

The verb 'playing' should be in the simple present tense 'plays' to agree with the subject 'she'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' and 'a free time' should be 'free time'.

× I always take photo of flowers in my daily life because I think when I take photo with flower it's have me reduce the stress and I want to keep memorable memory of flowers.

✓ I always take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think when I take photos with flowers, it helps me reduce stress and I want to keep memorable memories of flowers.

'photo' should be plural 'photos' when referring to multiple pictures. 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'it's have me reduce' is incorrect; 'it helps me reduce' is correct. 'memorable memory' is redundant; 'memorable memories' is better.

× people in my country often send flowers to other because flowers is very beautiful and it's affordable.

✓ People in my country often send flowers to others because flowers are very beautiful and affordable.

'other' should be plural 'others'. 'flowers is' should be 'flowers are' to agree in number. 'it's affordable' is better as 'affordable' without 'it's'.

× For example, it's my birthday, my parents always give me a rose because they think it's a very suit for me and.

✓ For example, on my birthday, my parents always give me a rose because they think it suits me very well.

'it's my birthday' should be 'on my birthday' for correct preposition. 'a very suit' is incorrect; 'it suits me very well' is correct. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.