花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như từ 'fractions' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I don't particularly love flowers because I find large bouquets a bit overwhelming. However, on special occasions like birthdays, I enjoy giving flowers to brighten someone's day.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'love' nên là 'loves', 'a flowers' nên là 'flowers' hoặc 'a flower'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để làm cho câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. She often buys flowers for herself as a way to practice self-care, which I think is a wonderful habit.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'throw a flowers' thay vì 'grow flowers'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Not really, because I live in a city where there aren't many places to grow flowers. However, my mother loves plants and tries to grow some flowers at home, but unfortunately, they don't grow well.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'fractions' và chú ý thì của động từ (ví dụ: 'took' nên là 'take' hoặc 'have taken'). Câu trả lời cũng nên ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

範例: Not really, because I don't like flowers much. However, sometimes I take photos of flowers when I visit gardens or parks because they add a natural touch to the pictures.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'appreciate' thay vì 'appreciation' và 'complete complementation' không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

範例: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions like ceremonies or graduations because flowers symbolize appreciation and congratulations.

× I can't stand overwhelming fractions of flowers.

✓ I can't stand overwhelming amounts of flowers.

The word 'fractions' is incorrect in this context; 'amounts' or 'quantities' is appropriate when referring to an uncountable noun like 'flowers' in bulk. 'Fractions' refers to parts of a whole in mathematics, not quantities of items.

× Yes, I know someone who love flowers, my best friend.

✓ Yes, I know someone who loves flowers, my best friend.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'someone'. 'Love' should be 'loves' to match the third person singular subject.

× She really loves flowers and often gives herself a flowers as a way to appreciate and treat herself.

✓ She really loves flowers and often gives herself flowers as a way to appreciate and treat herself.

The article 'a' is incorrect before the plural noun 'flowers'. It should be removed because 'flowers' is plural and does not need an article here.

× Not really because I live in a city so there not many place that throw a flowers.

✓ Not really because I live in a city so there are not many places that have flowers.

'Place' should be plural 'places' to match 'many'. Also, 'throw a flowers' is incorrect; likely intended 'have flowers'. 'There' needs the verb 'are' for correct sentence structure.

× However my mother is really love plant so she try to throw some flowers but nothing is went good.

✓ However, my mother really loves plants so she tries to grow some flowers but nothing went well.

'Is really love' should be 'really loves' for third person singular. 'Try' should be 'tries'. 'Throw' is incorrect; 'grow' is appropriate for plants. 'Nothing is went good' is incorrect; correct form is 'nothing went well'.

× I don't stand the fractions of flowers so I try to avoid them.

✓ I can't stand the overwhelming amount of flowers so I try to avoid them.

Again, 'fractions' is incorrect; 'amount' or 'quantity' is appropriate. Also, 'I don't stand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I can't stand'.

× Sometimes I feel that uh flowers can be a good background because it can add the natural element to the picture, so that sometimes I took a picture when I went to the garden or the park.

✓ Sometimes I feel that flowers can be a good background because they can add a natural element to the picture, so sometimes I take pictures when I go to the garden or the park.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the context is habitual, present tense 'take' and 'go' should be used instead of past 'took' and 'went'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'flowers'. 'The natural element' should be 'a natural element'.

× Oh, usually, especially in some occasions like ceremony or in the graduation, because flowers have a lot of meanings about the appreciate as well as complete complementation, so that they usually give flowers to spread the appreciation to the other.

✓ Oh, usually, especially on some occasions like ceremonies or graduations, because flowers have a lot of meanings about appreciation as well as complete complementation, so they usually give flowers to spread appreciation to others.

'Occasions' should be plural. 'Like ceremony or in the graduation' should be 'like ceremonies or graduations'. 'The appreciate' is incorrect; 'appreciation' is the correct noun. 'The other' should be 'others'. Also, 'on' is the correct preposition for occasions.