花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Use plural forms correctly and avoid unclear phrases like "plastic and reflection atmosphere" and "lovely frequencies." Try to give clear reasons and examples in a logical way using linking words.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty and improve the environment. For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home as they create a pleasant and refreshing atmosphere. Additionally, flowers often have lovely scents that can improve my mood.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. Use simple sentences and correct verb forms. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on giving a clear example.

範例: Yes, I know my close friend who loves flowers. She enjoys looking at flowers and even likes tasting some edible flowers because they make her feel happy and more beautiful.

建議: Your answer has some good ideas but contains grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "gender" and "packages never have beautiful flowers." Use correct plural forms and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: There are not many flowers where I live because it is a very urban area with lots of buildings and few green spaces. Most people prefer to live in apartments, so there is not much room for gardens or flower beds. However, some parks nearby have beautiful flowers.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect words like "shepherds" and "more food." Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Give clear reasons and examples with linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors very beautiful. For example, when I walk in the park or visit the swimming pool, I like taking photos of flowers because it helps me relax and enjoy nature more.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains minor errors like "simple pressure" and "special observations." Use correct phrases such as "simple presents" and "special occasions." Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: No, people in Hong Kong do not often send flowers to others because life is very busy and fast-paced. Many people prefer gifts or simple presents to express their feelings in other ways. However, flowers are sometimes given on special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

× Yes, I love flower because they add beautiful and can improve the environment.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and can improve the environment.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'add beautiful' is incorrect; it should be 'are beautiful' to describe the flowers' quality.

× For example, I enjoy having fresh flower at home as they create the plastic and reflection atmosphere.

✓ For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home as they create a pleasant and refreshing atmosphere.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'they'. 'Plastic and reflection atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'pleasant and refreshing atmosphere' to convey the intended meaning.

× Additionally, flower often have lovely frequencies that can improve my mood.

✓ Additionally, flowers often have lovely fragrances that can improve my mood.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'have'. 'Frequencies' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fragrances' to describe pleasant smells.

× Yes I know it's close to belief loveless flowers.

✓ Yes, I know someone who loves flowers.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be restructured to clearly express the idea that the speaker knows someone who loves flowers.

× She enjoyed to see the flower and taste the flower because the things flower can make she had pee and more beautiful.

✓ She enjoys seeing and smelling the flowers because they make her happy and more beautiful.

'Enjoyed to see' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund 'seeing'. 'Taste the flower' is likely intended as 'smell the flowers'. The phrase 'make she had pee and more beautiful' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'make her happy and more beautiful'.

× There are not many flower when I leave because it is a very urban area with lots of buildings and few green space.

✓ There are not many flowers where I live because it is a very urban area with lots of buildings and few green spaces.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'many'. 'When I leave' is incorrect; it should be 'where I live'. 'Green space' should be plural 'green spaces' to match 'few'.

× Most people prefer to live in apartments, so there is not much room for gender or flower beds.

✓ Most people prefer to live in apartments, so there is not much room for gardens or flower beds.

'Gender' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'gardens'. The preposition 'for' is correct.

× However, some packages never have beautiful flowers and.

✓ However, some parks never have beautiful flowers.

The sentence is incomplete and contains the incorrect word 'packages'. It should be 'parks' and the sentence should be completed properly.

× Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find this coloured and shepherds is very beautiful.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors and shapes very beautiful.

'This coloured and shepherds' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'their colors and shapes' to describe flowers. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject.

× For example, when I walk in the past or visiting the swimming pool, I like taking photo with the flower because it can help me to relax and enjoy nature more food.

✓ For example, when I walk in the park or visit the swimming pool, I like taking photos of flowers because it helps me relax and enjoy nature more.

'Walk in the past' is incorrect; it should be 'walk in the park'. 'Visiting' should be 'visit' to match tense. 'Taking photo with the flower' should be 'taking photos of flowers'. 'Help me to relax' is better as 'helps me relax'. 'Enjoy nature more food' is incorrect; 'more' alone suffices.

× No, people in Hong Kong do not often send flowers to others because life is very busy and fast-paced.

✓ No, people in Hong Kong do not often send flowers to others because life is very busy and fast-paced.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Many people prefer gifts or simple pressure express their feelings in other ways.

✓ Many people prefer gifts or simple presents to express their feelings in other ways.

'Pressure' is incorrect; the correct word is 'presents'. The phrase 'simple pressure express' is ungrammatical; it should be 'simple presents to express'.

× However, flowers are sometimes given on special observations like birthdays or weddings.

✓ However, flowers are sometimes given on special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

'Observations' is incorrect; the correct word is 'occasions' to refer to special events.