花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和用词有些错误，如“Irish”应为“iris”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并注意语法正确。

範例: Yes, I love many types of flowers such as roses, irises, and lilies because of their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrances. Their scent helps me relax and reduce stress.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“She say”应为“She says”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致。

範例: Yes, my mother loves flowers and grows many kinds like roses, lilies, and irises in our garden. She says their fragrance helps her feel relaxed and less stressed.

建議: 句子结构不完整且语法错误较多，如“These flowers are planting personal garden”不通顺。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复。

範例: Yes, there are many kinds of flowers where I live. My mother has a personal garden where she plants roses, lilies, and other flowers. She enjoys their beautiful fragrances.

建議: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，句子不连贯。建议简化句子，明确表达意思，使用正确的时态和连词。

範例: I don't often take photos of flowers. However, when the weather is bad and my mother is working, she sometimes asks me to take pictures of the garden to share with her.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“some people was ill”应为“some people are ill”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的时态和更自然的表达。

範例: Yes, sending flowers is quite popular in my country. People often send flowers to celebrate occasions like graduations or to show care when someone is ill.

× I love many types of flowers like roses, Irish and lilies because the vibrant colour and many various fragrances of the flowers.

✓ I love many types of flowers like roses, irises and lilies because of the vibrant colours and various fragrances of the flowers.

这里“Irish”应为“irises”，表示鸢尾花，且“colour”应为复数“colours”，因为指多种颜色；“many various”重复，改为“various”即可。

× When you smell the fragrances of the flowers, you can reduce your stress and unwind you.

✓ When you smell the fragrances of the flowers, you can reduce your stress and unwind yourself.

“unwind”后面需要反身代词“yourself”，表示放松自己。

× She say she likes the fragrances of the flowers because it can reduce her stress and relax her.

✓ She says she likes the fragrances of the flowers because they can reduce her stress and relax her.

主语“She”是第三人称单数，动词“say”应加-s变为“says”；“fragrances”是复数，代词应为“they”而非“it”。

× These flowers are planting personal garden.

✓ These flowers are planted in a personal garden.

“planting”用法错误，应使用被动语态“are planted”，且“in a personal garden”表示地点。

× She plant many types of flowers in the garden such as roses, lilies.

✓ She plants many types of flowers in the garden such as roses and lilies.

此句描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“plants”；另外列举时应加“and”。

× Not often when my mother is going to do the work and I was at home, the weather is very terrible.

✓ Not often, when my mother is going to work and I am at home, the weather is very terrible.

“was”应改为现在时“am”，因为描述的是现在的情况；“do the work”改为“work”更自然。

× My mother called me to take a photo of the garden and to share the picture to her and share very worried about her.

✓ My mother called me to take a photo of the garden and share the picture with her because she was very worried.

句子结构混乱，应调整为“share the picture with her”表示“与她分享”，并用“because she was very worried”说明原因。

× when some people was ill they will send flowers to care.

✓ When some people are ill, they will send flowers to show care.

“some people”是复数，动词应为“are”而非“was”；“send flowers to care”表达不完整，改为“send flowers to show care”更准确。