花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“flower is”应为“flowers are”，“symbol of romantic”应为“symbol of romance”。建议注意单复数和词性搭配，避免表达不自然。

範例: Yes, flowers are my biggest passion in life because I think they are a symbol of romance. I love various kinds of flowers such as roses, violets, and tulips.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“she always buy”应为“she always buys”，表达不清晰且有冗余。建议简洁明了地表达，注意动词时态和主谓一致。

範例: Yes, my mother is very passionate about flowers. She often buys them and plants many in our garden, so our house is always full of beautiful flowers.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“flower exhibition are”应为“flower exhibitions are”，且“I'm gonna to go around”表达不正式。建议使用正式表达并注意复数形式。

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because the climate is quite warm. Every spring, flower exhibitions are held in parks, and I usually enjoy visiting them.

建議: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“take photo”应为“take photos”，“allow my friends to record the flower in me”不合逻辑。建议简化句子，明确表达拍照习惯。

範例: Of course, I often take photos of flowers because their blooming period is short, and I like to capture their beauty to share with my friends.

建議: 回答中语法和表达混乱，如“send flower”应为“send flowers”，“festival people by a bunch of flower”不通顺。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的词汇和搭配。

範例: Yes, it is a tradition in my country to send flowers to others, especially on important dates and festivals. People usually give bouquets to their loved ones, relatives, and close friends.

× Yes, flower is my biggest passion in life as I think it's a symbol of romantic.

✓ Yes, flowers are my biggest passion in life as I think they're a symbol of romance.

这里flower应该用复数形式flowers，因为表达的是对花的总体喜爱；另外，a symbol of romantic应改为a symbol of romance，romantic是形容词，romance是名词。

× I love various kind of flowers such as rose, Violet and tulips.

✓ I love various kinds of flowers such as roses, violets and tulips.

various后面应接复数名词kinds，flowers应为复数形式；具体花名也应使用复数形式。

× She always buy flowers, sometimes on set, sometimes by serving.

✓ She always buys flowers, sometimes on set, sometimes by serving.

主语是第三人称单数she，谓语动词buy应加s变为buys。

× You know, she plants lots of flowers and our house is full of flowers also.

✓ You know, she plants lots of flowers and our house is full of flowers too.

这里没有明显的语法错误，但also改为too更自然。

× She loves.

✓ She loves them.

句子缺少宾语，导致结构不完整，应补充宾语them指代flowers。

× Every spring, the flower exhibition are held in every park.

✓ Every spring, the flower exhibitions are held in every park.

exhibition应使用复数形式exhibitions，因为是多次活动；谓语are与复数主语保持一致。

× I'm gonna to go around.

✓ I'm gonna go around.

gonna是going to的口语缩写，后面不需要再加to。

× I not only take photo of flowers but also allow my friends to record the flower in me.

✓ I not only take photos of flowers but also allow my friends to record the flowers with me.

photo应为复数photos；record the flower in me表达不清，应改为record the flowers with me。

× So my friend circle is full of this.

✓ So my friend circle is full of them.

this指代不明确，应改为them指代前文的flowers。

× Yes, it has become a tradition in our country to send flower to each other especially on important dates and festival people by a bunch of flower and send it to their lover, relative and costly friends.

✓ Yes, it has become a tradition in our country to send flowers to each other especially on important dates and festivals. People buy a bunch of flowers and send them to their lovers, relatives and close friends.

flower应为复数flowers；festival应为复数festivals；people是复数，buy和send谓语应对应；lover, relative, costly friends应为复数形式lovers, relatives, close friends；costly friends表达不当，应改为close friends。