花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且略显冗余，建议简化表达，避免堆砌信息，同时注意语法准确性。

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and fragrant. I often buy them to decorate my home and lift my mood.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复信息，并注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: My mother loves flowers very much. She has a small garden on our balcony where she grows them, although they sometimes don't last long.

建議: 回答内容具体且有数据支持，但句子结构稍显复杂，建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意动词时态和主谓一致。

範例: Yes, there are many flowers everywhere in my city, such as in gardens, schools, and on viaducts. Last year, the government spent about 190 million yuan on planting them.

建議: 回答表达了热情，但存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意介词使用和词汇搭配，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I love taking photos of flowers, especially when I visit botanical gardens. I enjoy sharing these pictures on my blog.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊表达。

範例: Yes, people often send flowers as gifts in my country. For instance, roses are popular for romantic occasions, and people also send flowers to their mothers on special days.

× Flowers are so beautiful and fragrant that they are symbols of fashion, love, congratulation and sympathy, you name it.

✓ Flowers are so beautiful and fragrant that they are symbols of fashion, love, congratulations and sympathy, you name it.

“congratulation” 应为复数形式 “congratulations”，因为这里指的是祝贺的多种表达，需用复数形式。

× My mother creates a small area for garden on our balcony to plant flowers.

✓ My mother creates a small area for a garden on our balcony to plant flowers.

“area for garden” 中缺少冠词，应为 “area for a garden”，表示“一个花园的区域”。

× My mother bought them.

✓ My mother bought them.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× You can see a variety of flowers almost everywhere in our city, no matter in the garden, schools or on the viaducts.

✓ You can see a variety of flowers almost everywhere in our city, no matter in gardens, schools or on the viaducts.

“in the garden” 应改为复数形式 “in gardens”，因为这里指多个花园。

× The amount of money which our government spend on planting flowers on the viaducts reached an incredible number of CN¥190 million last year.

✓ The amount of money which our government spends on planting flowers on the viaducts reached an incredible number of CN¥190 million last year.

主语 “government” 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 “spends”。

× I want to take photos them whenever I see them, especially when I visit volcanic gardens.

✓ I want to take photos of them whenever I see them, especially when I visit volcanic gardens.

“take photos them” 缺少介词 “of”，正确表达是 “take photos of them”。

× I have an absolute passion about taking nice pictures of them to show in my post blogs.

✓ I have an absolute passion for taking nice pictures of them to show in my post blogs.

“passion about” 应改为 “passion for”，表示对某事的热情。

× flowers have a wide range of features that people can use them as cure or gifts.

✓ flowers have a wide range of features that people can use as cure or gifts.

“that people can use them” 中的 “them” 多余，应去掉。

× For example, you can send roses to your lovers in some special anniversaries and send connections to your mother.

✓ For example, you can send roses to your lovers on some special anniversaries and send carnations to your mother.

“in some special anniversaries” 应改为 “on some special anniversaries”，表示在某些特殊纪念日；“connections” 应为 “carnations”，意为康乃馨，是常用的花名。