花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免语法错误和冗余，句子结构应更自然流畅。例如，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they smell wonderful. Moreover, having flowers around helps me feel relaxed when I am under pressure.

建議: 回答应避免语法错误和不完整的句子，使用连接词使内容更连贯，同时避免无关信息。

範例: Yes, many people around me love flowers. For example, my parents especially my father often buy flowers to decorate our home.

建議: 回答中应注意语法正确性和表达清晰，避免模糊的描述，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Most of them are green plants that my father takes care of.

建議: 回答应注意语法和表达的自然性，避免重复和不连贯，使用连接词使句子更完整。

範例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I am more interested in photographing people and other subjects.

建議: 回答应注意语法和表达的准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复和不自然的表达。

範例: Yes, more and more people have been sending flowers to others in recent years. However, older people usually prefer to give delicious food or cakes instead of flowers.

× Yes, I do love flowers because firstly flowers smell so good and when I have flowers I feel better and when I under the pressure.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers because firstly flowers smell so good and when I have flowers I feel better and when I am under pressure.

句中缺少动词be的正确形式，'under the pressure'前应加上动词be的现在时态'am'，表示状态。

× Now there are many people love flowers around me.

✓ Now there are many people who love flowers around me.

缺少关系代词'who'，连接主句和定语从句，表示'喜欢花的人'。

× Basically, my parents love flowers very much and especially my father, he often buys some flowers. Go home.

✓ Basically, my parents love flowers very much, and especially my father often buys some flowers to take home.

句子结构不完整，'Go home'应与前句合并，且表达更自然，应为'to take home'表示带回家。

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live, especially most of them are green plants which by my father.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live, especially most of them are green plants grown by my father.

缺少动词，'which by my father'不完整，应加动词'grown'表示'由我父亲种植'。

× No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't like flowers anymore and I like take photos of people and other things.

✓ No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't like flowers anymore and I like to take photos of people and other things.

动词'like'后应接不定式'to take'，而非直接接动词原形。

× Yes, there are more and more people often send flowers to others in recent years.

✓ Yes, more and more people have often sent flowers to others in recent years.

表示最近几年发生的动作，应使用现在完成时'have sent'，而非一般现在时'send'。

× But in old people circle they don't like send flowers to others, they prefer to send delicious food or cakes.

✓ But in the old people circle, they don't like to send flowers to others; they prefer to send delicious food or cakes.

动词'like'后应接不定式'to send'，且句子中缺少定冠词'the'，使表达更准确。