花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар бор, масалан, 'cause' ўрнига 'because' сўзини ишлатинг ва 'it is white' ўрнига 'they are white' деб тўғри жамланг. Шунингдек, жавобингизни янада табиий ва аниқ қилиш учун, гапларни қисқартиринг ва бироз кўпроқ контекст беринг.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they are very attractive, especially white ones like orchids. They always make me smile when someone gives me flowers.

建議: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва такрорланишлар бор, масалан, 'big fan' ўрнига 'a big fan' ва 'go her her home' ўрнига 'go to her home' деб тўғри ёзинг. Шунингдек, гапларни бириктириш учун боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг.

範例: Yes, of course. My mother is a big fan of growing flowers, especially in her yard. When you go to her home, you can see many beautiful flowers like jasmine and narcissus.

建議: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсизлик бор. Масалан, 'which is planted' ўрнига 'which are planted' ва 'every time we're entering to my house' ўрнига 'every time I enter my house' деб тўғри ёзинг. Шунингдек, жавобингизни қисқартиринг ва аниқроқ қилинг.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. The City Council plants flowers outside my house, which gives me a positive feeling. I also have some plants inside my home.

建議: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар бор, масалан, 'pay attention to my around' ўрнига 'pay attention to my surroundings' деб ёзинг. Шунингдек, жавобингизни янада табиий қилиш учун такрорланишларни олдин олинг.

範例: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers. If I'm in a good mood and paying attention to my surroundings, I can take pictures. However, when I'm in a hurry, it's impossible.

建議: Жавобингизда тушунарсиз сўзлар бор, масалан, 'new payer love' нима эканлигини аниқлаштиринг ёки уни олиб ташланг. Шунингдек, гапларни аниқ ва тўғри тузинг.

範例: Yes, of course. Uzbek people often send flowers to their close relatives or new loved ones. They do this to show respect and express their feelings.

× Yes I love flowers cause flowers are very attractive especially when it is white like orchid.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because flowers are very attractive, especially when they are white like orchids.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb and pronouns must agree in number. 'It is' should be 'they are' to match plural 'flowers'. Also, 'orchid' should be plural 'orchids' to refer generally to the flower type. Use 'because' instead of 'cause' for formal correctness.

× I cannot stop smiling when I see someone bringing me the flower.

✓ I cannot stop smiling when I see someone bringing me flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it is more natural to receive flowers in general, and it matches the context of loving flowers.

× My mother is big fan of growing flowers, especially in her yard.

✓ My mother is a big fan of growing flowers, especially in her yard.

The article 'a' is missing before 'big fan'. This is an article error but also relates to preposition usage as 'fan of' requires the article before 'big fan'.

× When you go her her home there are a lot of beautiful and attractive flowers like Jasmine or Nargis.

✓ When you go to her home, there are a lot of beautiful and attractive flowers like jasmine or nargis.

The preposition 'to' is required after 'go' to indicate direction. Also, 'her her' is a repetition error. Flower names should be lowercase unless proper nouns.

× together with the outside flowers which is planted by City Council every time we're entering to my house, it gives me a positive vibe and also I have in home plants.

✓ Together with the outside flowers which are planted by the City Council every time we enter my house, it gives me a positive vibe and I also have indoor plants.

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are planted' not 'is planted'. 'Entering to' is incorrect; use 'enter'. 'In home plants' should be 'indoor plants' for natural expression.

× If I'm in a good mood and when I'm ready to pay attention to my around I can take photo, but when I am in a hurry it's impossible.

✓ If I'm in a good mood and ready to pay attention to my surroundings, I can take photos, but when I am in a hurry, it's impossible.

'Pay attention to my around' is incorrect; it should be 'pay attention to my surroundings'. 'Take photo' should be plural 'take photos' for general meaning.

× Yes, of course Uzbek people love to send flowers to their close relatives or new love, new payer love.

✓ Yes, of course, Uzbek people love to send flowers to their close relatives or new love, new partner love.

'New payer love' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'new partner love' is more appropriate. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× They send flowers in order to show respect and intention.

✓ They send flowers in order to show respect and affection.

'Intention' is not the correct noun here; 'affection' or 'care' fits better to express feelings shown by sending flowers.