花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'I took fluff from myself' and 'your flower'. Try to use clear, simple sentences and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I love flowers very much because they make me feel happy and connected to nature. Whenever I see or smell flowers, I feel overjoyed. Their fragrance attracts me, and they brighten my day.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and confusing phrases like '01 of my cousin', 'girly pop', 'take orchard or some far'. Try to speak clearly and directly answer the question. Use simple sentences and correct grammar. Add linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, one of my cousins loves flowers. She enjoys planting them in her garden because it makes her happy. Whenever she receives flowers, she feels very joyful and excited.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'We are live as I live' and 'plan the water by the technological'. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Use linking words like 'also' and 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. I live in the countryside, so we plant many flowers in our fields. Also, there is a public garden near my house where the local authorities have planted many flowers and maintain the area well using modern technology.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases like 'English coast in classes', 'a lot of large', and 'hear my mom's loans'. Try to speak clearly and use simple, correct sentences. Explain your ideas logically with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers during my daily travel to English classes. I like to change my route to see different flowers. Taking photos helps me remember their beauty and cheers me up when I feel sad.

建議: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear words like 'meme often sensors', 'how many towards that person', and 'kind of tradition in my religions'. Try to use simple, clear sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'also' and 'because' to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to show their love and respect. It is also a tradition to bring flowers when visiting someone's home to make them happy. Additionally, sending flowers is part of some religious customs.

× I really love flowers and whenever I get flower or I took fluff from myself I feel really happy and appreciated.

✓ I really love flowers and whenever I get flowers or I take fluff from myself I feel really happy and appreciated.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context of general love for flowers. Also, 'took' should be 'take' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Fluff' seems incorrect here but is retained as per instruction.

× whenever I get flower or I took fluff from myself I feel really happy and appreciated.

✓ whenever I get flowers or I take fluff from myself I feel really happy and appreciated.

The verb 'took' is past tense but the sentence is in present tense context, so it should be 'take' to maintain tense consistency.

× whenever I see your flower or have a flower I feel over the moon for it and they smell really attracts me toward that particular flower.

✓ whenever I see your flower or have a flower I feel over the moon for it and their smell really attracts me toward that particular flower.

The pronoun 'they' refers to plural but 'flower' is singular; it should be 'their' to refer to plural 'flowers' or rephrase to maintain agreement.

× 01 of my cousin really love flowers as she loves to plant flowers or tomorrow as she's a girly pop she always perfect to take orchard or some far as these two are her favorite.

✓ One of my cousins really loves flowers as she loves to plant flowers or tomatoes as she's a girly pop she always prefers to take orchard or some farm as these two are her favorite.

'01' should be 'One', 'cousin' should be plural 'cousins' as 'one of' refers to a member of a group. 'Love' should be 'loves' for third person singular. 'Tomorrow' is likely 'tomatoes'. 'Perfect' should be 'prefers'. 'Far' should be 'farm'.

× she always perfect to take orchard or some far as these two are her favorite.

✓ she always prefers to take orchard or some farm as these two are her favorite.

'Perfect' is incorrect verb form here; it should be 'prefers' to agree with third person singular subject 'she'.

× Yes, there are a quite lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, there are quite a lot of flowers.

The phrase 'a quite lot' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'quite a lot'.

× We are live as I live in the countryside so we plant a lot of flowers in our field specially.

✓ I live in the countryside, so we plant a lot of flowers in our fields, especially.

'We are live' is incorrect; it should be 'I live'. 'Field' should be plural 'fields' to match context. 'Specially' should be 'especially'.

× there is a public garden near my house where the Municipal Corporation has replaced a lot of flowers and they also maintain the hygiene and plan the water by the technological.

✓ there is a public garden near my house where the Municipal Corporation has planted a lot of flowers and they also maintain hygiene and water the plants using technology.

'Replaced' is incorrect; 'planted' is appropriate for flowers. 'Plan the water by the technological' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'water the plants using technology'.

× I saw a lot of large on my way.

✓ I see a lot of flowers on my way.

'Saw' is past tense but context is habitual action, so present tense 'see' is correct. 'Large' is incorrect; likely 'flowers'.

× And as I love flying so I will always prefer to click photos so that I can remember it and see it in my future whenever I feel low as they work as a medicine for me to hear my mom's loans.

✓ And as I love flowers, I will always prefer to click photos so that I can remember them and see them in my future whenever I feel low as they work as medicine for me to hear my mom's loans.

'Flying' should be 'flowers'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'photos'. 'A medicine' should be 'medicine' without article. 'Loans' is unclear but retained.

× If I'm not mistaken, people in my country meme often sensors to each other as they do to this this show their love and how many towards that person.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, people in my country often send flowers to each other as they do this to show their love and harmony towards that person.

'Meme' is incorrect; likely 'may'. 'Sensors' should be 'send flowers'. 'How many' is incorrect; likely 'harmony' or 'affection'.

× Moreover, it's a tradition that whenever we go to someones place we always brings a flower so that they can feel happy and other than that it's kind of tradition in my religions.

✓ Moreover, it's a tradition that whenever we go to someone's place we always bring a flower so that they can feel happy and other than that it's a kind of tradition in my religion.

'Someones' should be 'someone's' possessive. 'Brings' should be 'bring' to agree with plural subject 'we'. 'Religions' should be singular 'religion'.