花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is enthusiastic but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, because they symbolize love. I enjoy their fragrance, which makes me feel fresh and comfortable. Sometimes, I wear a rose in my hair, and it makes me feel confident when I see myself in the mirror.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about the person and their love for flowers. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, my little sister loves flowers, especially lotuses. She likes them because they symbolize purity and beauty. She often talks about how lotuses grow in muddy water but still remain beautiful, which inspires her.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers around my home, such as roses and lotuses. Every morning, I enjoy their beautiful fragrance, which helps me feel refreshed and stress-free. Sometimes, I wish I could relax among the flowers, but I usually can't.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers during special occasions like birthday parties. Including flowers in my pictures makes them look more beautiful and charming. When I post these photos on Instagram, I receive many positive comments, which makes me happy.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to clearly explain why people send flowers and give specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, many people in my country send flowers as gifts on special occasions. For example, roses are popular because they symbolize love and can strengthen relationships by expressing feelings.

× Yes, of course I love large specially derose wildly to indicate the love and it is a symbol of love and I really like their fragrance.

✓ Yes, of course I love large, specially de rose wildly to indicate love, and it is a symbol of love, and I really like their fragrance.

The phrase 'large specially derose wildly' is unclear and seems to misuse adjectives and adverbs. 'Specially' should be 'especially' to correctly modify the noun. Also, 'derose wildly' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Whenever I smell it, I feel very fresh and comfort table.

✓ Whenever I smell it, I feel very fresh and comfortable.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe a feeling. Using the correct adjective improves sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I always preferred to put on my here's an eye looks at.

✓ I always prefer to put it on where my eyes can see it.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and is unclear. 'Put on my here's an eye looks at' is grammatically incorrect. Correcting the preposition and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I look so fantastic when I see to myself in a mirror.

✓ I look so fantastic when I see myself in a mirror.

The phrase 'see to myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun usage is 'see myself.' Removing 'to' corrects the pronoun usage.

× Well, it is well she is well, my little sisters, who loves our Lord 2 auflage, specially the Lotters.

✓ Well, my little sisters love our Lord 2 Auflage, especially the Lotters.

The subject 'my little sisters' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' instead of 'loves' to agree in number. Also, 'especially' is the correct adverb form.

× It is a symbol of purity and it also teaches the lesson beside to grow in a messy in moments.

✓ It is a symbol of purity and also teaches the lesson to grow beside messy moments.

The phrase 'beside to grow in a messy in moments' is awkward and incorrect. Correcting the preposition and word order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's a it's a beauty. Beauty are remained the same and it is on national flowers and she loves a lot to them.

✓ It's a beauty. Beauty remains the same, and it is one of the national flowers, and she loves them a lot.

'Beauty are remained' is incorrect; 'beauty' is singular and should be paired with 'remains.' Also, 'on national flowers' should be 'one of the national flowers.' Correcting these errors improves subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× Yes, of course, in my home down there are loads of flowers like loaders, rose whenever I woke up early in the morning and they are fragrance is quite beautiful, is quite pleased ends when when I smell it I feel very refreshed and stress free.

✓ Yes, of course, in my hometown there are loads of flowers like roses. Whenever I wake up early in the morning, their fragrance is quite beautiful and pleasing. When I smell it, I feel very refreshed and stress-free.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'home down' should be 'hometown'; 'loaders' likely means 'roses'; 'they are fragrance' should be 'their fragrance'; 'is quite pleased ends' is incorrect and should be 'is quite pleasing.' Also, tense consistency is needed ('woke' to 'wake'). Correcting these improves grammar and clarity.

× Sometime I feel to fall asleep and sleeps in between them but in reality I can't do that.

✓ Sometimes I feel like falling asleep and sleeping among them, but in reality, I can't do that.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'feel to fall asleep' is incorrect, should be 'feel like falling asleep'; 'sleeps' should be 'sleep' to match the subject. Correcting these errors improves tense and verb form usage.

× Yes, of course, whenever I had to go in any of the occasion such as birthday party, I prefer to click or pictures with flowers.

✓ Yes, of course, whenever I have to go to any occasion such as a birthday party, I prefer to take pictures with flowers.

'Had to go in any of the occasion' is incorrect; 'have to go to any occasion' is correct. Also, 'click or pictures' should be 'take pictures.' Correcting modal verb usage and prepositions improves sentence correctness.

× It make my photos become more presents an it looks adorable.

✓ It makes my photos look more presentable and adorable.

'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject; 'more presents an' is incorrect, likely meant 'more presentable.' Correcting verb agreement and adjective usage improves clarity.

× When I post on Instagram's I got a lot of comments also and I really like it to see such a such a adventure that I never experienced in my life.

✓ When I post on Instagram, I get a lot of comments, and I really like seeing such an adventure that I have never experienced in my life.

'Instagram's' should be 'Instagram'; 'got' should be 'get' to match present tense; 'like it to see' should be 'like seeing'; 'such a such a adventure' should be 'such an adventure.' Correcting prepositions and verb forms improves grammar.

× Yes, of course mainly some peoples in my country prefer to send off last order as a gift and sometime it also strengthens your relationships also because it brings up the already an love in their life and and if we're taking the example of rose that is a symbol of love which also also.

✓ Yes, of course, mainly some people in my country prefer to send off last orders as gifts, and sometimes it also strengthens relationships because it brings up the already existing love in their lives. For example, the rose is a symbol of love which also helps make relationships stronger.

'Peoples' should be 'people'; 'last order' likely means 'last orders' or 'flowers'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'your relationships' should be 'relationships'; 'already an love' should be 'already existing love'; 'their life' should be 'their lives.' Correcting plural forms and article usage improves grammar.