花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应注意语法准确性，例如将"I am allergic to it"改为"I am allergic to them"，并避免重复表达，如"When I smell it, I will feel uncomfortable"可以简化为"Their scent makes me uncomfortable"。此外，回答可以更自然流畅。

範例: No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to them. Their scent makes me uncomfortable, so I usually avoid being around them.

建議: 注意主谓一致错误，如"She love"应为"She loves"，"She think"应为"She thinks"。回答可以更连贯，使用连接词如"because"来丰富内容。

範例: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers very much because she believes they can make her happy and help relieve her stress.

建議: 注意语法错误，如"my hometown have"应为"my hometown has"，"a aromatics smell"应为"an aromatic smell"。"They are busy"用词不当，应描述花的特征。建议使用更具体的描述和连接词。

範例: Yes, my hometown has many flowers. They bloom beautifully and give off an aromatic smell that people really enjoy.

建議: 回答中出现了词汇错误，如"relieve my suggestion"应为"relieve my stress"或类似表达。"more closer"是重复比较，应改为"closer"。建议注意词汇准确性和语法。

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because it helps me relax and feel closer to nature.

建議: 注意主谓一致，如"a person send"应为"a person sends"，"she loves you and want"应为"she loves you and wants"。回答可以更自然，避免重复"you"，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, in my hometown, if someone sends you flowers, it usually means they love you or want to be friends with you.

× No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to it.

✓ No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to them.

这里的flowers是复数，代词it应改为them，表示复数。

× When I smell it, I will feel uncomfortable.

✓ When I smell it, I feel uncomfortable.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时而不是将来时。

× She love flowers very much.

✓ She loves flowers very much.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词love应加-s。

× She think flowers can make her happy and relieve her stress.

✓ She thinks flowers can make her happy and relieve her stress.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词think应加-s。

× Yes, my hometown have a lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, my hometown has a lot of flowers.

hometown是单数，谓语动词have应改为has。

× They are busy and have a aromatics smell.

✓ They are abundant and have an aromatic smell.

flowers不能用busy形容，改为abundant（丰富的）更合适；aromatics应为形容词aromatic，且前面冠词a应改为an。

× People always love it.

✓ People always love them.

flowers是复数，代词it应改为them。

× I will take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it can relieve my suggestion and make me feel more closer with nature.

✓ I take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it can relieve my stress and make me feel closer to nature.

这里用一般现在时更合适；suggestion应为stress（压力）；more closer是错误的比较级表达，应为closer；feel后面搭配介词to。

× Yes, and if a person send flowers to you in my hometown, that means she loves you and want to make friends with you.

✓ Yes, and if a person sends flowers to you in my hometown, that means she loves you and wants to make friends with you.

主语a person是第三人称单数，动词send应加-s；want也应加-s。