花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như từ 'fragans' nên là 'fragrance', và tránh lặp từ như 'bloom blooming'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi nhỏ làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm chính xác và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because of their beautiful colors and delicate fragrance. Whenever I see them blooming in the garden, I feel relaxed and happy as they create a fresh and peaceful atmosphere.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'gun' nên là 'person' hoặc 'people', 'flower' nên là 'flowers', và câu 'she sensed am say is a weight of money' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, many people around me love flowers, including my mom, sister, and friends. For example, whenever I give my mom a bouquet, she may say it's expensive, but I often see her quietly admiring the flowers.

建議: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, ví dụ 'are' nên là 'or', 'Is smell really good is fragen' không đúng. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I live in a city, so there isn't much space for gardens or green areas. However, I often see many different types of colorful and beautiful flowers in the park near my house. Their fragrance is really delicate and pleasant.

建議: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'up you Kate' nên là 'a bouquet', 'take photo' nên là 'take photos', và câu cuối cần chia động từ đúng. Hãy luyện tập phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

範例: Sometimes, when someone gives me a bouquet of flowers, I like to take photos of them and post the pictures on my social media. I enjoy flowers because they are colorful and brighten up my day, so capturing their beauty makes me happy.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'with Wednesday Teachers Day' nên là 'on Teachers' Day', 'as usually given to expect gratitude' không đúng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt chính xác và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

範例: In Vietnam, people often send flowers on special occasions such as Teachers' Day. Flowers are usually given to express gratitude and appreciation to women and teachers for their hard work and support. Besides that, flowers can also be sent as a simple thank you.

× I love flowers because I enjoy the beautiful colors, their delicate fragans.

✓ I love flowers because I enjoy the beautiful colors and their delicate fragrance.

The word 'fragans' is a misspelling of 'fragrance', which is a noun. Also, the sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two parts properly. Adding 'and' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Whenever I see flowers bloom blooming in the garden, I feel relaxed and happy because they create a B foods and refreshing atmosphere.

✓ Whenever I see flowers blooming in the garden, I feel relaxed and happy because they create a fresh and refreshing atmosphere.

The phrase 'bloom blooming' is redundant; only 'blooming' is needed as the present participle to describe the flowers. Also, 'B foods' is incorrect and likely a typo; 'fresh' fits the context better.

× Well, I think almost every gun around me loves flower, such at my mom, my sister and my friends.

✓ Well, I think almost everyone around me loves flowers, such as my mom, my sister, and my friends.

The word 'gun' is incorrect; 'everyone' is appropriate here. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural subject. 'Such at' should be 'such as' to introduce examples.

× For instant, whenever I give my mom a bouquet of flowers, she sensed am say is a weight of money, but I often catch her admiring the flowers quietly.

✓ For instance, whenever I give my mom a bouquet of flowers, she says it is a waste of money, but I often catch her admiring the flowers quietly.

The phrase 'she sensed am say is a weight of money' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'she says it is a waste of money' to correctly express her opinion. 'For instant' should be 'For instance'.

× Well I live in a city so there isn't much space left for gardens are green areas.

✓ Well, I live in a city so there isn't much space left for gardens or green areas.

The phrase 'gardens are green areas' is incorrect; it should be 'gardens or green areas' to indicate alternatives. Also, a comma after 'Well' improves readability.

× The flowers are very colorful in an really beautiful. Is smell really good is fragen is really delicate.

✓ The flowers are very colorful and really beautiful. Their smell is really good; the fragrance is really delicate.

The original sentence has several errors: 'in an' is incorrect, should be 'and'; 'Is smell' should be 'Their smell'; 'is fragen' is a misspelling of 'fragrance'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Well, sometimes when someone gives me up you Kate of flowers, I like to take photo of them and post the picture on my social media accounts.

✓ Well, sometimes when someone gives me a bouquet of flowers, I like to take photos of them and post the pictures on my social media accounts.

'up you Kate' is a misspelling of 'a bouquet'. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match 'them'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to be consistent.

× I really enjoy flowers because they're colorful, brighten up my day, so capturing their beauty in photos make me feel happy.

✓ I really enjoy flowers because they're colorful and brighten up my day, so capturing their beauty in photos makes me feel happy.

The sentence needs 'and' to connect the two clauses properly. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'capturing their beauty'.

× Well, in Vietnam, people often send flowers on special occasions such as with Wednesday Teachers Day.

✓ Well, in Vietnam, people often send flowers on special occasions such as Teachers' Day on Wednesday.

The phrase 'such as with Wednesday Teachers Day' is awkward. It should be 'such as Teachers' Day on Wednesday' to correctly express the occasion and preposition usage.

× This flower as usually given to expect gratitude and appreciation to woman and teachers for their hard work and support.

✓ These flowers are usually given to express gratitude and appreciation to women and teachers for their hard work and support.

'This flower as usually given' is incorrect; it should be 'These flowers are usually given'. 'Expect' should be 'express'. 'Woman' should be plural 'women'.

× Besides, the event flower can also be sent as a simple thank.

✓ Besides, flowers can also be sent as a simple thank you.

'The event flower' is unclear; 'flowers' is better. 'Thank' should be 'thank you' to complete the expression.