花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid repeating 'Moreover' and correct grammatical errors like 'prefer to receiver' to 'prefer to receive'. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up my living space. For example, I often give flowers to my family and friends on their birthdays as a thoughtful gift. I also enjoy receiving flowers, especially those from France, as they are very beautiful.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons. Try to be more specific and avoid vague terms like 'flower loter'.

範例: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For instance, my close friend Harsimran Kaur prefers to buy only roses because she believes that the rose is a symbol of love.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide specific information. Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' properly to connect ideas. Also, avoid irrelevant or confusing words.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my country has a rich variety of plants. Moreover, our national flower is the lotus, which is very beautiful and symbolic.

建議: Your answer has unclear words like 'lava ran' and grammatical mistakes. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words like 'because'.

範例: Yes, I take photos of flowers daily because the area where I live is full of beautiful flowers. I enjoy capturing their colours and shapes in my photographs.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons. Avoid repetition and irrelevant phrases.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because they believe flowers convey good wishes. For example, flowers are commonly given during celebrations as they bring freshness and fragrance to the occasion.

× Yes, I love flowers because it gives me space.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they give me space.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives' to agree in number.

× Moreover, I also prefer to receiver for a gift or as a flower from in France.

✓ Moreover, I also prefer to receive a gift or a flower from France.

The word 'receiver' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'receive'. Also, 'from in France' is incorrect; it should be 'from France'.

× Yes, I know a lot of people who loves a flower, but there is a one close friend of all of the flower loter.

✓ Yes, I know a lot of people who love flowers, but there is one close friend who is a flower lover.

The verb 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. 'A flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'A one' is incorrect; use 'one'. 'Loter' is a misspelling of 'lover'.

× Her name is a Harsimran Kaur and he preferred to buy only rose flower becauses she believes that Rosa is a symbol of flower.

✓ Her name is Harsimran Kaur and she prefers to buy only rose flowers because she believes that the rose is a symbol of flowers.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect for 'Her name'; it should be 'she'. 'Preferred' should be 'prefers' to match present tense. 'Rose flower' should be plural 'rose flowers'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Rosa' should be 'the rose' and 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× Yes, there are a lot of flower in my country because and moreover my country national flower is a lot better and it would describle we describe Carla.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my country. Moreover, my country's national flower is very beautiful and we describe it as Carla.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' after 'a lot of'. 'In' is the correct preposition. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it has been corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes Sir, I take photos of lava ran on daily basis becauses the area where I live is a full of flowers and it is a surrounded by flowers.

✓ Yes Sir, I take photos of lavenders on a daily basis because the area where I live is full of flowers and is surrounded by them.

'Lava ran' is likely 'lavender'. 'On daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Is a full of flowers' should be 'is full of flowers'. 'It is a surrounded' should be 'it is surrounded'. 'Them' refers back to flowers.

× Yes, yes people of my country prefer to give flowers to other becauses they believe that are giving a flower.

✓ Yes, people of my country prefer to give flowers to others because they believe that giving flowers is meaningful.

'Other' should be 'others'. 'Becauses' is misspelled 'because'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; corrected for clarity.

× So two other Sir is a good designer giving someone give as well as the flowers are given them a lot of freshness and fragrance.

✓ So, Sir, giving flowers to others is a good gesture as flowers provide a lot of freshness and fragrance.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It has been restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly.