花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more coherent, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Keep your answer within 5 sentences and focus on expressing your feelings about flowers more naturally.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colours always lift my mood. Whenever I receive flowers, I feel positive and happy. I also enjoy giving flowers to people I care about, as it shows my affection for them.

建議: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. Also, be specific about why your friend likes sunflowers and what the colour yellow represents to her.

範例: Yes, many people love flowers. For example, my best friend really likes sunflowers because she says the yellow colour reminds her of bright, sunny days, which makes her feel cheerful.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Be specific about the availability and cost of flowers in your area, and people's preferences.

範例: There aren't many flowers around where I live because they are quite expensive. As a result, people don't often buy or plant flowers at home, even though they generally like them.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and ends abruptly. Try to avoid repeating phrases and complete your thoughts fully. Use linking words to explain when and why you take photos of flowers, and keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but occasionally I do. For instance, when someone gives me flowers as a gift, I like to take pictures to show my appreciation and keep the memory.

建議: Your answer has good content but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Be specific about the cultural significance of sending flowers in your country.

範例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to their relatives and family members. It is a cultural gesture to show respect or gratitude, especially when thanking someone.

× I do love flowers a lot because of the vibrant color of different flowers.

✓ I do love flowers a lot because of the vibrant colours of different flowers.

The word 'color' should be plural 'colours' to agree with 'different flowers' which is plural. In Australian English, plural forms are used for multiple items.

× It gives me positive.

✓ It gives me positive vibes.

The sentence is incomplete; 'positive' is an adjective and needs a noun to complete the meaning. Adding 'vibes' clarifies the intended meaning.

× Ana received an whenever.

✓ (This sentence is unclear and seems incorrect; it should be removed or rewritten for clarity.)

The sentence 'Ana received an whenever.' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It lacks a proper structure and meaning, so it should be omitted or rewritten.

× I have a flower, it gives me positive vibes.

✓ When I have a flower, it gives me positive vibes.

The original sentence is a comma splice. Using 'When' correctly connects the clauses and improves sentence structure.

× Along with that, I do prefer giving flowers to the person that I love.

✓ Along with that, I do prefer giving flowers to the person whom I love.

The relative pronoun 'whom' is correct here as it refers to the object of the verb 'love'.

× Is so still love towards a particular person.

✓ It is a way to show love towards a particular person.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× There are many people who like. Flowers.

✓ There are many people who like flowers.

The period after 'like' is incorrect and breaks the sentence unnaturally. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× If I had to remember then my best friend she loves.

✓ If I had to remember, then my best friend loves flowers.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. The correction completes the thought and improves clarity.

× Flower an I think sunflower is her favorite color because according to her the color yellow it represents the bright sunny day with.

✓ Flowers, and I think sunflower is her favourite flower because, according to her, the colour yellow represents a bright sunny day.

Corrected plural 'flowers', added missing words for clarity, and fixed article and preposition usage. Also, 'favourite' and 'colour' are spelled in Australian English.

× I don't see that most flowers round the area that I live with kids.

✓ I don't see many flowers around the area where I live with kids.

Corrected 'most flowers round' to 'many flowers around' and improved sentence structure for clarity.

× Flowers are very expensive nowadays and.

✓ Flowers are very expensive nowadays.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Because of that, people are not investing that much money on getting a flowers, are planting some flowers in their home.

✓ Because of that, people are not investing much money in getting flowers or planting some flowers in their homes.

Corrected prepositions and article usage, and improved sentence flow and clarity.

× But I do think they prefer flowers.

✓ But I do think they prefer flowers.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× I do take pictures of flowers, but not on a daily basis and I do take pictures of them occasionally.

✓ I do take pictures of flowers, but not on a daily basis; I take pictures of them occasionally.

Improved sentence flow by replacing 'and' with a semicolon to separate independent clauses.

× If someone else gave me a flower as a gift, I do take pictures of them as appreciation and to show the love.

✓ If someone gives me a flower as a gift, I take pictures of it to show appreciation and love.

Corrected tense to present simple to match habitual action, changed 'them' to 'it' to agree with singular 'flower', and improved sentence clarity.

× I do take. Pictures of tank. And the most important?

✓ I do take pictures of them, and that is the most important.

Corrected fragmented sentences into a complete, clear sentence.

× Yes, people. In my country they often send flowers to their relatives, to their family members.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to their relatives and family members.

Removed unnecessary period and improved sentence flow.

× Raise a culture of my country that giving a flower is showing some kind of gestures toward other people and even if you are thanking someone then they usually send flowers tightly.

✓ In the culture of my country, giving flowers is a gesture towards others, and even when thanking someone, people usually send flowers.

Corrected sentence structure, word choice, and removed unclear phrase 'send flowers tightly' for clarity.