花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I love flowers because they smell good and make nature beautiful."

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they have a pleasant fragrance and they enhance the beauty of nature.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. For example, "Yes, my mother loves flowers and even grows them in a small garden."

範例: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers; my mother enjoys growing them in our small garden.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear and complete response. For example, "No, there are not many flowers where I live because the area is covered with buildings."

範例: No, there are not many flowers in my neighborhood because most of the land is occupied by buildings.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use simpler and clearer sentences. For example, "No, I don't take photos of flowers daily because I am busy studying and don't have time."

範例: No, I usually don't take photos of flowers because I am busy with my studies and have little free time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, "Yes, people in my country often send flowers on various occasions, such as parties or celebrations."

範例: Yes, in my country, people frequently send flowers to others during special occasions like parties and celebrations.

× Actually yes I do love flowers because it is smell so good and it makes. Nature beautiful.

✓ Actually yes I do love flowers because they smell so good and they make nature beautiful.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it is smell' instead of 'they smell' to describe flowers, which are plural. Also, 'it makes. Nature beautiful.' is fragmented and should be 'they make nature beautiful.' Flowers are plural, so plural pronouns and verbs should be used.

× Actually yes I do know someone who loved flower and that is my mom.

✓ Actually yes I do know someone who loves flowers and that is my mom.

The sentence uses past tense 'loved' when referring to a current or general fact. Since the mom still loves flowers, present tense 'loves' is appropriate. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match general reference.

× She loved flower and seek even grow flowers.

✓ She loves flowers and even grows them.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect word usage. 'Loved' should be 'loves' for present tense. 'Seek even grow flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'even grows them' to express that she cultivates flowers.

× Like in a small garden.

✓ Like in a small garden.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a phrase, but it is incomplete. No plural or singular error here, but it would be better connected to previous sentence for clarity.

× Actually, no, there are not a lot of flower.

✓ Actually, no, there are not a lot of flowers.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because 'a lot of' refers to plural countable nouns.

× Where do I live where I live because it is a.

✓ Where I live, the land is covered with buildings.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be restructured to clearly state the location and condition.

× The land is covered with buildings.

✓ The land is covered with buildings.

This sentence is correct.

× Actually, no, I do not take a photos of flower in my daily life because I'm too busy with my study and you do that, I don't get a time to take a photo of flower.

✓ Actually, no, I do not take photos of flowers in my daily life because I'm too busy with my studies and I don't get time to take photos of flowers.

'a photos' is incorrect; 'photos' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'my study' should be 'my studies'. 'you do that' is unclear and removed. 'a time' should be 'time' without article.

× Actually yes, in my country people send often flower to others in different kind of a question or like.

✓ Actually yes, in my country people often send flowers to others on different occasions or like.

'send often flower' should be 'often send flowers' for correct adverb placement and plural noun. 'different kind of a question' is incorrect; it should be 'different occasions'.

× Whenever there are some kind of parties deeper giving flowers then other things.

✓ Whenever there are some kinds of parties, people give flowers more than other things.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'deeper giving flowers then other things' is incorrect. It should be rephrased to express that flowers are given more often than other gifts at parties.