花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Please focus on correct word usage and grammar to make your answer more natural. For example, use 'love' instead of 'low', and 'creations' instead of 'creation'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they are one of the most beautiful creations of nature. Their vibrant colours and attractive fragrances make gardens look stunning and lively.

建議: Work on clarity and correct word choice to improve your answer. For example, use 'different kinds of flowers' and 'when they bloom'. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'decorate them in was N'. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, my dad loves flowers because he enjoys their fragrances. He grows different kinds of flowers in our backyard, waters them regularly, and decorates our house with them when they bloom.

建議: Improve grammar by using correct plural forms and tenses, such as 'types of flowers' and 'grow naturally'. Also, use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers around my home. We have a garden behind our house where different types of flowers grow naturally, and my father also grows various flowers in our backyard, which he decorates regularly.

建議: Focus on sentence structure and avoid incomplete sentences. Use correct phrases like 'nature's scenery' instead of 'natural sin Aries'. Also, link your ideas clearly and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers and other natural scenery daily. I often post these pictures on my Instagram and share them as streaks on Snapchat because I find flowers very attractive.

建議: Make your answer more natural by using correct expressions such as 'I don't think people in my country often send flowers to others'. Also, explain why flowers are used on special occasions to add more detail.

範例: I don't think people in my country often send flowers casually, but they are definitely important during special occasions like weddings, where flowers symbolize celebration and good wishes.

× I really low flowers.

✓ I really love flowers.

The word 'low' is an adjective meaning 'not high', but the intended meaning is to express affection, so the correct verb is 'love'. This is a common spelling mistake and should be corrected to 'love' to convey the intended meaning.

× I think flowers are one of the most beautiful creation by God.

✓ I think flowers are one of the most beautiful creations by God.

The noun 'creation' should be plural 'creations' because it refers to multiple items (flowers) being part of many creations. Using singular here is incorrect when referring to multiple entities.

× how beautiful their looks are.

✓ how beautiful they look.

The phrase 'their looks' is awkward and incorrect here. 'Look' is a verb meaning 'appear', so 'how beautiful they look' is the correct expression to describe appearance.

× I think it is one of the most beautiful thing ever existed on world

✓ I think it is one of the most beautiful things ever existed in the world

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because 'one of the' refers to a member of a group. Also, 'on world' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in the world'.

× I think it is one of the most beautiful thing ever existed on world

✓ I think it is one of the most beautiful things ever existed in the world

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to the world; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate location within the world.

× there are lot of flowers around my home.

✓ there are lots of flowers around my home.

The phrase 'lot of' should be 'lots of' when used with plural countable nouns like 'flowers' to indicate a large number.

× where there are different type of flowers which grows out naturally.

✓ where there are different types of flowers which grow naturally.

'Type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple kinds. Also, 'grows' should be 'grow' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'.

× when they blow zoom he used to pick them up and decorate them in was N.

✓ when they bloom, he used to pick them up and decorate them in vases.

The word 'blow zoom' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'bloom' meaning flowers open. Also, 'was N' seems to be a typo and should be 'vases' which is the correct noun for flower containers.

× My dad really adores flowers.

✓ My dad really adores flowers.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× He is very fond of the fragrances by flowers

✓ He is very fond of the fragrances of flowers

The preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'of' is the correct preposition to indicate possession or association with 'fragrances'.

× He used to grow different kind of flowers in our backyard.

✓ He used to grow different kinds of flowers in our backyard.

'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' because it refers to multiple varieties of flowers.

× We have 1 garden behind our house where there are different type of flowers which grows out naturally.

✓ We have one garden behind our house where there are different types of flowers which grow naturally.

'Type' should be plural 'types' and 'grows' should be 'grow' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'. Also, '1' should be spelled out as 'one' in formal speech.

× we do have one backyard which is connected to our house where my father used to grow different type of flowers and decorate it regularly in our house.

✓ we do have one backyard which is connected to our house where my father used to grow different types of flowers and decorate it regularly in our house.

'Type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple varieties of flowers.

× I really enjoy taking photos of flowers and other natural sin Aries daily.

✓ I really enjoy taking photos of flowers and other natural scenes daily.

The phrase 'natural sin Aries' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'natural scenes' meaning views of nature.

× I used to click them and put them on my Instagram page.

✓ I use to click them and put them on my Instagram page.

Since the question is about daily life, present tense 'use to' is more appropriate than past tense 'used to' which indicates a past habit no longer done.

× I also used. To send it daily as a streak on my Snapchat.

✓ I also send them daily as a streak on my Snapchat.

Again, present tense 'send' is appropriate for current habitual action. Also, 'used to' indicates past habit, which conflicts with 'daily' implying present habit.

× And I think flowers are very attractive thing and I really love.

✓ And I think flowers are very attractive things and I really love them.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'them' completes the thought.

× Well, I don't think so that people in my country often send flowers to others.

✓ Well, I don't think that people in my country often send flowers to others.

The phrase 'I don't think so that' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't think that' to introduce a subordinate clause.