花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simpler and correct sentences, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance and vibrant colors help me relax. I always keep flowers at home as they create a peaceful atmosphere.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct pronouns, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, my cousin Allie loves flowers very much. She always keeps flowers in her room and likes to give them as gifts on special occasions.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to speak in simple, correct sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there are several gardens. People like to plant trees and flowers, which makes the environment fresh and relaxing.

建議: Your answer has tense errors and some unclear phrases. Use correct tenses and clear sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my free time. I usually visit gardens with my friends in the evening and enjoy capturing the beautiful scenes, which helps me relax after a busy day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

範例: Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others because they are considered a good way to express feelings. Flowers are commonly given as gifts during weddings, festivals, and other special occasions.

× Yes, I love flowers because the fragments and vibrant colors helps me to relax my mind and I always keep them in my home because I think they would be better to keep my mind relax and she replied mode.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because the fragrance and vibrant colors help me to relax my mind and I always keep them in my home because I think they are better to keep my mind relaxed and calm.

The subject 'fragments and vibrant colors' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also, 'fragments' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fragrance'. The phrase 'keep my mind relax' should be 'keep my mind relaxed' to use the correct adjective form. 'She replied mode' is unclear and likely an error, so it is omitted for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to talk about a person I know who loves the mostly flowers because he thinks dad and have some to relax their mind.

✓ Yes, I would like to talk about a person I know who mostly loves flowers because he thinks they help to relax his mind.

The pronouns were used incorrectly: 'he thinks dad and have some' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'he thinks they help to relax his mind' to correctly refer to flowers and possessive pronoun for 'his mind'.

× And he is my cousin whose name is Allie. Always to have to have flowers in her room in his room and he always will always try to give flowers to someone when there is an occasion.

✓ And he is my cousin whose name is Allie. He always has flowers in his room and he always tries to give flowers to someone when there is an occasion.

The verb forms were incorrect: 'Always to have to have' should be 'He always has'. Also, 'her room in his room' is contradictory; 'his room' is correct as referring to a male cousin. 'He always will always try' is redundant; 'he always tries' is correct.

× Yes, there are lot of flowers we're the place where I live because they have placed the area the image I am a resident.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers in the place where I live because the area is well maintained where I am a resident.

The phrase 'there are lot of flowers' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. 'We're the place' is incorrect; it should be 'in the place'. The sentence structure is unclear and corrected for clarity.

× I am blaming is there a lot of gardens available there and most of the people there product tries to plant trees and flowers there and over Florida figments makes them feel relaxed and if they go to the garden's the air.

✓ I am saying there are a lot of gardens available there and most of the people try to plant trees and flowers. The fresh fragrance makes them feel relaxed and when they go to the gardens, the air is fresh.

'I am blaming' is incorrect; 'I am saying' is appropriate. 'Product tries' is incorrect; 'people try' is correct. 'Over Florida figments' is unclear and corrected to 'fresh fragrance'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Yes, I often took photos of flowers in my daily life because whenever I have some spare time I went to the gardens and parks with my friends in the evening and I would like to take some photographs because I love the scenario of these flowers and I also know feel very relaxed around dance because it helps me to feel free of mind after a lot of work load and eggs.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because whenever I have some spare time I go to the gardens and parks with my friends in the evening and I like to take some photographs because I love the scenery of these flowers and I also feel very relaxed around them because it helps me to feel free in my mind after a lot of workload and stress.

The verb tense should be present simple 'take' and 'go' to match 'often' and habitual actions. 'I would like' is changed to 'I like' for habitual preference. 'Scenario' is incorrect; 'scenery' is correct. 'Know feel' is incorrect; 'feel' is correct. 'Around dance' is unclear and corrected to 'around them'. 'Work load and eggs' is corrected to 'workload and stress' for meaning.

× Yes, in my country often the person flowers to the others because they think that there's a better way for a way to set up say and they are the best gifts as someone sent to the others.

✓ Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others because they think that it's a better way to express feelings and they are the best gifts to give to someone.

The modal verb 'send' was missing and sentence structure was incorrect. 'Person flowers to the others' is incorrect; 'people often send flowers to others' is correct. 'Set up say' is unclear and corrected to 'express feelings'.

× And in most of them know wedding events and other opinions like either eat and other big opinions like holidays men they visit to the another form and they often used to give flowers as a gift.

✓ And in most wedding events and other occasions like birthdays and holidays, people visit one another and often give flowers as gifts.

The pronouns and words were incorrect and unclear: 'most of them know wedding events' corrected to 'most wedding events'; 'opinions' corrected to 'occasions'; 'either eat' corrected to 'birthdays'; 'holidays men they visit to the another form' corrected to 'holidays, people visit one another'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.