花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单句补充细节。

範例: Yes, I love flowers because my grandma grows many of them in our house, like in the living room and bedroom. I enjoy their smell and they make me feel happy.

建議: 表达混乱，语法和词汇使用错误较多，句子不连贯。建议用简单句表达，注意时态和词汇准确性。

範例: Yes, my grandma loves flowers. She buys many flowers of different colors and places them in our house. She also likes to take photos of the flowers and share them with her friends.

建議: 回答不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，再用简单句补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, there is a garden near my house with many flowers. I can see the flowers when I open my window. Sometimes, I see people taking photos of the flowers, which makes me happy.

建議: 表达较为重复，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议简洁表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的语法。

範例: Yes, I like taking photos of flowers because they are beautiful and come in many colors. Taking photos of them makes me happy.

建議: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议先明确回答问题，再用简单句补充具体例子。

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, we give flowers to our mothers or loved ones to show our love.

× Yes, I really love flowers 'cause my grandma is wearing a flowers and she will grow many flowers in my house such as the living room and my bedroom.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers because my grandma is wearing a flower and she will grow many flowers in my house such as the living room and my bedroom.

这里的flowers应为单数flower，因为wearing a flower表示佩戴一朵花，复数形式不合适。

× So. So I like in there, I like to smile to flower smell and I think.

✓ So, I like being there, I like to smell the flowers and I think.

短语中应使用like being there表示喜欢待在那里，smile to flower smell应改为smell the flowers表示闻花香。

× Yes, my grandma was very like flowers and she will buy many. Different color flowers Anna girl dim in my house, such as the living room and my bedroom.

✓ Yes, my grandma really likes flowers and she will buy many different colored flowers and arrange them in my house, such as the living room and my bedroom.

was very like flowers语法错误，应为really likes flowers；Different color应为different colored；Anna girl dim无意义，推测为arrange them。

× And she wearing joined to take photo for the flowers.

✓ And she is wearing a dress to take photos of the flowers.

原句语法混乱，推测意思是她穿着衣服去拍花，应使用take photos of the flowers。

× And share with them friends.

✓ And shares with her friends.

them friends应为her friends，代词使用错误。

× Yes, there have a garden nearby my house and I can sort a lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, there is a garden near my house and I can see a lot of flowers.

there have应为there is；nearby my house应为near my house；sort a lot of flowers应为see a lot of flowers。

× Where I opened the window and I can sort when people take photo to a lot of flowers and can make me feel happy and sometime I can smell the flowers met.

✓ When I open the window, I can see people taking photos of many flowers, which makes me feel happy, and sometimes I can smell the flowers' scent.

opened应为open；sort应为see；take photo to应为take photos of；flowers met无意义，改为flowers' scent。

× Of course, I very like to take photo of the flowers and I think the flowers is very beautiful in the nature and it has many a kind of color of the flowers.

✓ Of course, I really like to take photos of flowers and I think flowers are very beautiful in nature and they have many kinds of colors.

very like应为really like；take photo应为take photos；the flowers is应为flowers are；many a kind of color应为many kinds of colors。

× So I think the photo if I take photo of the flowers is very beautiful and I enjoy it.

✓ So I think the photos I take of the flowers are very beautiful and I enjoy it.

photo应为photos；if I take photo of the flowers语序不当，改为I take of the flowers；is应为are。

× Of course, I think in my country saved flowers is expected to.

✓ Of course, I think in my country sending flowers is common.

saved flowers无意义，推测为sending flowers；is expected to语法不完整，改为is common。

× Our love and such as we can see the flowers to my to our mothers or lovers can have the love to our.

✓ It is a way to express our love, such as giving flowers to our mothers or lovers to show our love.

句子结构混乱，代词使用错误，需重组句子表达意思。