花— Part 1 評分報告

× They're vibrant colors and fragrances can brighten up any room or garden.

✓ Their vibrant colors and fragrances can brighten up any room or garden.

这里的 "They're" 是 "They are" 的缩写，表示主语是复数的 "他们是"，但句子中需要的是物主代词 "Their"，表示 "它们的"。应使用物主代词来修饰名词。

× I often buy flowers to decorate home.

✓ I often buy flowers to decorate my home.

"home" 前缺少限定词，通常需要加上物主代词 "my" 来表示 "我的家"。

× I think it is a great way to express emotions and celebrate a special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, anniversary's.

✓ I think it is a great way to express emotions and celebrate special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, anniversaries.

"a special occasions" 中 "occasions" 是复数，前面不应加不定冠词 "a"。"anniversary's" 错误地使用了所有格，应为复数形式 "anniversaries"。

× The sheet has to with required is truly her joy and pride and and gardening is her favorite past time.

✓ The garden she has is truly her joy and pride, and gardening is her favorite pastime.

原句中 "The sheet has to with required" 语义不通，推测为 "The garden she has"。"past time" 应为合成词 "pastime"，表示消遣爱好。

× She think it is a great way to express emotions and celebrate that special.

✓ She thinks it is a great way to express emotions and celebrate that special.

主语 "She" 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 "s"，即 "thinks"。

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

该句无语法错误，符合 "there be" 结构。

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my area. We have numerous parks and gardens filled with variety of flowers thanks to the stable climate.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my area. We have numerous parks and gardens filled with a variety of flowers thanks to the stable climate.

"filled with variety of flowers" 中缺少冠词 "a"，应为 "a variety of flowers"。

× And some local rest days also plant flowers in their yards and balconies.

✓ And some local residents also plant flowers in their yards and balconies.

"rest days" 词不达意，推测为 "residents"，意为居民。

× And the city of Nice is flower festivals to celebrate the beauty of the Blues.

✓ And the city of Nice has flower festivals to celebrate the beauty of the blues.

句子缺少谓语动词，"is flower festivals" 结构错误，应改为 "has flower festivals"。"Blues" 应为小写 "blues"，指蓝色。

× Yes, I love capturing the beauty of flower is during my walks and taking photos of flowers to be a relaxing hobby and I share these photos on my social media and additionally, it is a great way to practice my photographing scales is specially when I made the botanical gardens.

✓ Yes, I love capturing the beauty of flowers during my walks and taking photos of flowers as a relaxing hobby. I share these photos on my social media and, additionally, it is a great way to practice my photography skills, especially when I visit the botanical gardens.

"beauty of flower is" 中 "flower" 应为复数 "flowers"，"is" 多余。"photographing scales" 应为 "photography skills"。"made the botanical gardens" 应为 "visit the botanical gardens"。句子过长，需拆分。

× Yes, Daniel flower is is quite common in my country part equally for some special occasions like birthdays, weddings, an anniversary's is a traditional way to express love and appreciation.

✓ Yes, sending flowers is quite common in my country, especially for some special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. It is a traditional way to express love and appreciation.

"Daniel flower is is" 语义不明，推测为 "sending flowers is"。"an anniversary's" 错误使用所有格，应为复数 "anniversaries"。句子结构混乱，需拆分。

× With flurries being common in cities in flower delivery service is widely available is convenient for people to send flowers.

✓ With flowers being common in cities, flower delivery service is widely available and convenient for people to send flowers.

"flurries" 拼写错误，应为 "flowers"。句子缺少连词，需加 "and" 连接。