名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议用完整句子表达名字的含义，并且避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Yes, my name has a special meaning. It reflects my parents' hopes that I will be gentle, quiet, and pure, like a kind doctor.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议用更流畅的句子说明名字的来源，并避免重复。

範例: I chose my son's name inspired by a character named Mo Yi from an ATV show because I liked how it sounded. So, I named him Mo Ye.

建議: 回答较为自然，但有口头语“umm”“uh”，建议减少口头语，使用更正式的表达。

範例: No, no one in my family has the same name as me, and I have never met anyone else with my name.

建議: 回答内容较好，但有重复词汇和语法错误。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: In the past, Chinese parents usually chose traditional names or followed generational naming rules. However, nowadays, they are more creative and diverse when naming their children.

建議: 回答中有口头语，表达不够清晰。建议用更具体的例子说明流行名字，并减少口头语。

範例: Yes, for example, my name includes characters like Jean and Jay, which were very popular at that time. Many of my classmates had similar names.

× My name, character, expectations from my parents.

✓ My name, character, and expectations from my parents.

此处列举多个名词时，缺少了连接词“and”，导致句子结构不完整。应在最后两个名词之间加“and”表示并列关系。

× They hope their doctor is a gentle, quiet and a pure girl.

✓ They hope their daughter is a gentle, quiet, and pure girl.

此处应使用“daughter”而非“doctor”，且形容词之间应加逗号分隔，且“a pure girl”中“a”前不应有“and”。

× Someday I heard a heard a character named MO Yi and the sort is sound sound very nice so I remembered it.

✓ Someday I heard a character named MO Yi and the sort of sound was very nice, so I remembered it.

句中重复了“heard a”，应删除多余部分；“the sort is sound sound very nice”表达不清，应改为“the sort of sound was very nice”。

× Later I named my song MO Ye as well.

✓ Later I named my son MO Yi as well.

“song”应为“son”，且名字应保持一致。

× In the past, parents parents choose a more traditional way to naming their own children, or some families choose name based on generational hierarchy in their claim.

✓ In the past, parents chose a more traditional way to name their own children, or some families chose names based on generational hierarchy in their clan.

“parents parents”重复，应删除一个；“choose”应为过去式“chose”；“to naming”应为“to name”；“choose name”应为“chose names”；“claim”应为“clan”。

× Umm, there are several cases in my class with them that include those characters.

✓ Umm, there are several cases in my class with names that include those characters.

“cases with them”表达不清，应改为“cases with names”；“cases”与“names”复数形式保持一致。