智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and slightly unnatural. Try to respond directly with a clear statement and avoid unnecessary complexity. For example, you can say "I don't remember doing puzzles often when I was a child." This is more natural and concise.

範例: I don't remember doing puzzles often when I was a child because I was more interested in outdoor games.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains errors like 'resolver WordPress' which is unclear. Also, avoid repetition like 'prefer prefer'. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example, "I usually listen to music when I feel bored or during trips, rather than solving puzzles."

範例: I usually listen to music when I feel bored or during trips, rather than solving puzzles, because it helps me relax.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'wherever board puzzles'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, "I prefer number puzzles because I am good at maths. On the other hand, I find word puzzles difficult and sometimes frustrating when I can't find the right answer."

範例: I prefer number puzzles because I am good at maths. On the other hand, I find word puzzles difficult and sometimes frustrating when I can't find the right answer.

建議: Your answer is generally good but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'they do not need any personal company them they can spend their lesser time'. Try to use clearer and grammatically correct sentences. For example, "Yes, puzzles are beneficial for elderly people because they keep their minds active and help reduce loneliness. They can enjoy puzzles even when they are alone."

範例: Yes, puzzles are beneficial for elderly people because they keep their minds active and help reduce loneliness. They can enjoy puzzles even when they are alone.

× I hardly remember if I ever had solved a puzzle in my childhood.

✓ I hardly remember if I ever solved a puzzle in my childhood.

The past perfect tense 'had solved' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a simple past event without a specific time before another past event. Use simple past 'solved' instead.

× I use resolver WordPress during the trip or whenever I feel bored.

✓ I use WordPress resolver during the trip or whenever I feel bored.

The phrase 'resolver WordPress' is incorrect in word order. The correct phrase is 'WordPress resolver' as 'WordPress' modifies 'resolver'.

× Instead of solving puzzles, I mostly prefer prefer to listen to music.

✓ Instead of solving puzzles, I mostly prefer to listen to music.

The word 'prefer' is repeated twice, which is a redundancy error. Remove the duplicate 'prefer' for correct sentence structure.

× The puzzles I like the most is number puzzles, as I am good in maths and I can solve a number of puzzles well.

✓ The puzzles I like the most are number puzzles, as I am good at maths and I can solve a number of puzzles well.

The subject 'puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, the correct preposition is 'good at' not 'good in'.

× as I am good in maths and I can solve a number of puzzles well.

✓ as I am good at maths and I can solve a number of puzzles well.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at' not 'in'.

× Wherever board puzzles, I find them quite annoying because sometimes I cannot find the right answer.

✓ As for board puzzles, I find them quite annoying because sometimes I cannot find the right answer.

The word 'Wherever' is incorrectly used here. The correct phrase is 'As for' to introduce the topic of board puzzles.

× This causes me to feel annoyed and I always get angry.

✓ This causes me to feel annoyed, and I always get angry.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses properly.

× Yes, puzzles can be beneficial to old people in many ways.

✓ Yes, puzzles can be beneficial for old people in many ways.

The correct preposition to use with 'beneficial' is 'for' rather than 'to'.

× Firstly, while solving the number puzzles, old people will remain engaged and they do not feel lonely.

✓ Firstly, while solving number puzzles, old people will remain engaged and will not feel lonely.

The phrase 'the number puzzles' is incorrect here; 'number puzzles' without 'the' is better. Also, to maintain parallel structure, use 'will not feel' instead of 'do not feel'.

× Secondly, they do not need any personal company them they can spend their lesser time by playing word puzzles or number puzzles.

✓ Secondly, they do not need any personal company; they can spend their leisure time playing word puzzles or number puzzles.

The sentence has a pronoun error and awkward phrasing. 'Company them' is incorrect; it should be 'company;'. Also, 'lesser time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'leisure time'. The semicolon separates two independent clauses properly.