智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言稍显口语化且有语法错误，如"expert of doing puzzles"应为"good at doing puzzles"。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意语法准确性。

範例: Yes, I was very good at doing puzzles when I was a child because I could complete jigsaw puzzles and crosswords very quickly. I really enjoyed the feeling of solving them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如"do not do puzzles every very often"应为"don't do puzzles very often"。建议简洁明了地表达，并避免重复。

範例: To be honest, I don't do puzzles very often these days because I spend a lot of time on my smartphone watching live streams or short videos.

建議: 回答较为自然，但缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加理由或比较，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: I don't mind either word puzzles or number puzzles because it depends on what's available. However, I find sudoku a bit more challenging than crosswords because it requires more logical thinking.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够准确，如"fight against burden"不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子结构。

範例: Yes, I think it's good for elderly people to do puzzles because it helps them stay mentally active and prevents brain decline. It can also reduce the risk of diseases like Alzheimer's.

× I was an expert of doing puzzles when I was a little 'cause I could complete a puzzle like jigsaw puzzles or crosswords very quickly.

✓ I was an expert at doing puzzles when I was little because I could complete puzzles like jigsaw puzzles or crosswords very quickly.

介词搭配错误，英语中“expert”后面通常用介词“at”而不是“of”，且“when I was a little”应为“when I was little”，表示小时候。建议改为“I was an expert at doing puzzles when I was little”。

× I was an expert of doing puzzles when I was a little 'cause I could complete a puzzle like jigsaw puzzles or crosswords very quickly.

✓ I was an expert at doing puzzles when I was little because I could complete puzzles like jigsaw puzzles or crosswords very quickly.

“expert”后面应接介词“at”表示擅长某事，而非“of”。此外，“a little”应改为“little”表示小时候。

× I really loved feeling when I crack something.

✓ I really loved the feeling when I cracked something.

“feeling”前应加定冠词“the”，且时态应与过去时一致，动词“crack”应改为过去式“cracked”。

× I do not do puzzles every very often at this stage 'cause I have lots of things to do with my smartphone, like watch some live streams or short real programs.

✓ I do not do puzzles very often at this stage because I have lots of things to do on my smartphone, like watching some live streams or short real programs.

“every very often”搭配错误，应为“very often”。“do with my smartphone”应改为“do on my smartphone”，表示在手机上做某事。动词“watch”应改为动名词“watching”，因为前面是介词“like”。

× I do not do puzzles every very often at this stage 'cause I have lots of things to do with my smartphone, like watch some live streams or short real programs.

✓ I do not do puzzles very often at this stage because I have lots of things to do on my smartphone, like watching some live streams or short real programs.

介词“with”用错，表示在手机上做某事应使用“on”。

× Yeah, because old people, they are almost retired and it is a good way to fight against burden and kill time.

✓ Yeah, because old people are almost retired, and it is a good way to fight against boredom and kill time.

“fight against burden”中的“burden”用词不当，应为“boredom”（无聊）。此外，句中“old people, they”重复主语，应去掉“they”。

× Yeah, because old people, they are almost retired and it is a good way to fight against burden and kill time.

✓ Yeah, because old people are almost retired, and it is a good way to fight against boredom and kill time.

“burden”应为“boredom”，表示无聊。

× And they also can prevent brain shrinkage.

✓ And it can also prevent brain shrinkage.

前文指代的是“doing puzzles”，是单数行为，故应使用“it”而非“they”。

× It can keep them away from some disease like Alzheimer's.

✓ It can keep them away from some diseases like Alzheimer's.

“disease”应使用复数形式“diseases”，因为指多种疾病。