智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid short, disconnected phrases. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I used to do puzzles in my childhood, and it was my favorite activity during my leisure time. For example, I would solve puzzles every evening, which helped me relax and improve my problem-solving skills.

建議: Your answer has good content but is broken into short, incomplete sentences. Try to connect your ideas using linking words and form complete sentences. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

範例: Usually, I do puzzles when I feel bored because they are a very brainstorming activity that boosts my skills. Therefore, puzzles are the best way to spend my leisure time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct sentence structures and clarify your points. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer doing word puzzles rather than number puzzles because I find number puzzles a bit difficult due to my confusion with numbers. On the other hand, word puzzles are easier and more enjoyable for me.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent and meaningful.

範例: Yes, I think puzzles are very good for old people because they help keep the mind active and improve problem-solving skills. Moreover, doing puzzles can strengthen mental health and prevent boredom.

× What example? Every evening. I used to. Do puzzles.

✓ For example, every evening I used to do puzzles.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The 'cause it is a very. Brainstorming activity to do and it. Boost your skills.

✓ Because it is a very brainstorming activity to do and it boosts your skills.

The phrase 'The 'cause' is incorrect; 'Because' should be used to introduce a reason. Also, 'boost' should be in third person singular form 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× And this is the best thing to do on your leisure time.

✓ And this is the best thing to do in your leisure time.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in your leisure time' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence is correct in verb form but preposition needed correction.

× I like to do word puzzles more than number puzzles becaused I feel number puzzle.

✓ I like to do word puzzles more than number puzzles because I find number puzzles

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'feel' is not appropriate here; 'find' is better to express difficulty.

× Is bit difficult for me because I have confusion. Towards numbers.

✓ It is a bit difficult for me because I have confusion about numbers.

The sentence lacks the subject 'It' and the phrase 'towards numbers' is incorrect; 'about numbers' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Silvert puzzle is easy for me.

✓ Silver puzzles are easy for me.

The word 'Silvert' seems to be a typo; assuming 'Silver' is intended. Also, 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match the context and verb agreement.

× Yes, it is very good for all people to do puzzle because they don't have anything to do.

✓ Yes, it is very good for all people to do puzzles because they don't have anything to do.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to refer to the activity in general.

× So it is the best problem solving activity to do and to make your mental health MO stronger to upgrade your skills.

✓ So it is the best problem-solving activity to do to strengthen your mental health and upgrade your skills.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving'. 'Make your mental health MO stronger' is unclear; 'strengthen your mental health' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And two, don't feel.

✓ Also, you don't feel bored.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'Also, you don't feel bored' completes the thought and fits the context.