家乡— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but very brief. To improve, try to add a bit more detail or description about your hometown to make your response more engaging and natural. For example, mention something unique or interesting about Orenburg.

範例: My hometown is Orenburg, a city in Russia known for its beautiful architecture and rich cultural heritage.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state what you like about your hometown and support it with specific reasons. Avoid negative phrasing if you mean positive feelings. Also, reduce filler words like 'uh'.

範例: I really like my hometown because it is where my family and friends live. I have many fond memories there, and the familiar places make me feel nostalgic.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is a bit unclear. Use the present perfect tense correctly and provide a clear timeline. Also, avoid unnecessary filler words. For example, say when you lived there and explain your recent move clearly.

範例: I lived in Orenburg since I was born, but I moved to Moscow last year because my father found a new job there.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Avoid filler words and awkward phrasing.

範例: To be honest, I'm not sure if my hometown is a good place for young people today. It was good for my generation, but the new generation might find it less comfortable because times have changed. However, I hope they can enjoy it as we did.

× I don't like about my hometown.

✓ I don't like my hometown.

The verb 'like' does not require the preposition 'about' after it. The correct form is 'I don't like my hometown.' without 'about'.

× I born there and I grow there and it's, uh, made me soon nostalgic.

✓ I was born there and I grew up there and it made me feel nostalgic.

The verbs 'born' and 'grow' need to be in the past tense to describe past events. 'Born' should be 'was born' (passive past), 'grow' should be 'grew up' (past tense with phrasal verb), and 'made me soon nostalgic' is incorrect; it should be 'made me feel nostalgic' to express the feeling properly.

× I have been lived there since, uh, my born, uh, but in the last year I moved because my father find a new job in a Moscow and now I live in a Moscow.

✓ I have lived there since I was born, but last year I moved because my father found a new job in Moscow and now I live in Moscow.

The present perfect continuous 'have been lived' is incorrect; it should be present perfect 'have lived'. 'My born' is incorrect; it should be 'I was born'. 'Find' should be past tense 'found' because the action happened in the past. Also, 'in a Moscow' is incorrect; 'in Moscow' is correct because 'Moscow' is a proper noun and does not need an article.

× ...but now we have any generation and it's different between us and I think it can be a little bit discomfort for new generation...

✓ ...but now we have a different generation and it's different from us and I think it can be a little bit uncomfortable for the new generation...

The word 'any' is incorrectly used; 'a different generation' is correct. The phrase 'different between us' should be 'different from us'. 'Discomfort' is a noun; the adjective 'uncomfortable' should be used to describe the feeling.

× ...but I think it's, uh, being good that they're a live how we lived.

✓ ...but I think it's good that they live the way we lived.

The phrase 'being good' is incorrect; 'it's good' is correct. 'They're a live' is incorrect; it should be 'they live'. Also, 'how we lived' is better expressed as 'the way we lived' for clarity.