工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and natural, and avoid unnecessary details that confuse the meaning.

範例: I am currently a student. I recently finished my high school education and plan to study abroad for my university degree, so I haven't enrolled in a university yet.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific details. Avoid repeating the same information and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: I don't have a job outside because I am a student and my family prefers me to focus on my studies. However, I help with household chores like cooking. In the future, I plan to work in a professional job after completing my education.

建議: Your answer is too short and lacks explanation. Always try to provide a complete answer with supporting details to show your language ability and make the conversation more engaging.

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because it offers a friendly environment and good opportunities for learning new skills.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question properly. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide reasons or explanations to support your opinion.

範例: Since I don't currently have a job, I can't say if I would like the place. But I hope to find a workplace that is supportive and enjoyable in the future.

建議: Your answer is inappropriate and does not respond to the question. Always provide a relevant and meaningful answer, even if brief, to demonstrate your speaking skills.

範例: In the future, I plan to work in the technology sector because I am interested in computers and innovation.

× Recently I completed my higher secondary education from at college.

✓ Recently I completed my higher secondary education at college.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate the place where the education was completed. This is a preposition error, but since 'Past tense issue' is the closest relevant category, it is noted here.

× I planned to going abroad for my next further studies and that's why I cannot admit it myself to a university yet.

✓ I plan to go abroad for my further studies and that's why I cannot admit myself to a university yet.

After 'plan to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'planned' should be 'plan' to match the present intention. 'Admit it myself' is incorrect; it should be 'admit myself'.

× I'm a student that's why my family cannot permission me to going outside for work.

✓ I'm a student, that's why my family cannot permit me to go outside for work.

'Permission' is a noun; the correct verb is 'permit'. After 'permit me to', the base form 'go' should be used, not 'going'.

× In the future I plan to working outside like job sector and other.

✓ In the future, I plan to work outside in the job sector and others.

After 'plan to', the base form of the verb 'work' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'working'. Also, 'like job sector and other' is unclear; 'in the job sector and others' is more appropriate.

× I only work at home like cooking and others work.

✓ I only work at home, doing cooking and other chores.

'Like' is incorrectly used to list activities; 'doing' is better to indicate activities performed. Also, 'others work' is unclear; 'other chores' is more appropriate.