工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“used to a doctor”应为“used to be a doctor”，“preparing for replying my PhD degree”应为“preparing to apply for a PhD degree”。建议加强语法基础，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I used to be a doctor, but I resigned two years ago. Now, I am preparing to apply for a PhD degree.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“where located in Yiwu”应为“which is located in Yiwu”，“a a big hospital with. Lot of patience”应为“a big hospital with many patients”。建议注意句子结构和拼写，避免断句错误。

範例: I worked in a big hospital which is located in Yiwu. It has many patients.

建議: 回答中有拼写错误和用词不当，如“a brilliant equipment”应为“excellent equipment”，“colleges”应为“colleagues”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并尝试使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because it has excellent equipment, and the colleagues there are very friendly.

建議: 回答不完整且含糊，“I walked”可能是“worked”的误用。建议直接回答问题并补充理由，避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I like the place where I worked because it was comfortable and the environment was friendly.

建議: 回答未完成且语法错误，如“prepared for applying”应为“preparing to apply”。建议完整表达想法，使用连贯的句子，并避免句子未完结。

範例: I want to become a doctor in the future. Currently, I am preparing to apply for a PhD degree because I want to gain more knowledge in my field.

× Absolutely, I used to a doctor but I resigned 2 years ago and now I am preparing for replying my PhD degree.

✓ Absolutely, I used to be a doctor but I resigned 2 years ago and now I am preparing to apply for my PhD degree.

句中缺少动词“be”，导致时态表达不完整。'used to'后应接动词原形，表示过去的习惯或状态。'preparing for replying'搭配不当，应改为'preparing to apply'，更符合表达申请博士学位的意思。

× I worked in a hospital where located in Yiwu and it is a a big hospital with. Lot of patience.

✓ I worked in a hospital located in Yiwu, and it is a big hospital with a lot of patients.

'where located'缺少动词，正确表达应为'located in Yiwu'。'a a'重复错误，应为'a'。'Lot of patience'拼写错误，且'patience'（耐心）应为'patients'（病人）。

× Yeah, I think it is a good place to work 'cause it has a brilliant equipment and the colleges in there are very friendly.

✓ Yeah, I think it is a good place to work because it has brilliant equipment and the colleagues there are very friendly.

'a brilliant equipment'中'equipment'是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词'a'。'colleges'（学院）应为'colleagues'（同事），词义错误。'cause'为口语缩写，正式表达应为'because'。

× Yeah, I like the place I walked.

✓ Yeah, I like the place I worked.

'walked'（走路）与语境不符，应为'worked'（工作），表示喜欢工作的地方。

× I want to become a doctor in the future and now I am prepared for applying the PhD degree. I want to get more knowledge in my field and.

✓ I want to become a doctor in the future and now I am preparing to apply for the PhD degree. I want to gain more knowledge in my field.

'prepared for applying'搭配不当，应为'preparing to apply'。'get more knowledge'表达不够正式，改为'gain more knowledge'更合适。句末不完整，应去掉多余的'and'。