工作— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
No, I'm not student, I work.
考官
Where do you work?>
考生
I work in a hotel luxury. I am conditor, I'm shift depart and I like my job because it was very interesting. I are they when I am very tired, but it's very.
考官
Is it a good place to work?
考生
It is a good place, I have good I have nice coworker and this place is very very interesting because we do very many cake and.
考官
Would you like the place where you work?
考生
I like my workplace because it is interesting and during the work we are already happy here and I like this.
考官
What are your future work plans?
考生
My future plans I next work here and I do many interesting and different kind of desserts.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
分數: 50.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს ბუნებრივი და სრულყოფილი. გამოიყენეთ სწორი გრამატიკა და გამოთქმა, მაგალითად, "No, I'm not a student; I work." ასევე, პასუხი უნდა იყოს სრულყოფილი და პირდაპირი.
範例: No, I'm not a student; I work full-time as a hotel employee.
Where do you work?
分數: 30.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო გასაგები და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ სწორი სიტყვები და გრამატიკა. ასევე, გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს თანმიმდევრული.
範例: I work in a luxury hotel as a pastry chef in the shift department. I enjoy my job because it is very interesting, although it can be tiring sometimes.
Is it a good place to work?
分數: 40.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სრულყოფილი და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ სწორი გრამატიკა და სიტყვები. დაამატეთ დეტალები, რათა პასუხი იყოს უფრო საინტერესო.
範例: Yes, it is a good place to work. I have nice coworkers, and the job is interesting because we make many different kinds of cakes.
Would you like the place where you work?
分數: 45.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ სწორი გრამატიკა და გამოთქმა. დაამატეთ დეტალები, რათა პასუხი იყოს უფრო მდიდარი.
範例: I like my workplace because it is interesting, and we enjoy our time working together, which makes the environment happy.
What are your future work plans?
分數: 40.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო გასაგები და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ სწორი გრამატიკა და სიტყვები. დაამატეთ დეტალები, რათა პასუხი იყოს უფრო სრულყოფილი.
範例: My future plans are to continue working here and to create many interesting and different kinds of desserts.
文法
× No, I'm not student, I work.
✓ No, I'm not a student, I work.
The noun 'student' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.
× I work in a hotel luxury.
✓ I work in a luxury hotel.
In English, adjectives usually come before the noun they modify, so 'luxury' should precede 'hotel'.
× I am conditor, I'm shift depart and I like my job because it was very interesting.
✓ I am a confectioner, I work shifts, and I like my job because it is very interesting.
The word 'conditor' is incorrect; the correct term is 'confectioner'. 'Shift depart' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'work shifts'. Also, the tense should be present 'is' to match the current job.
× I are they when I am very tired, but it's very.
✓ I am tired when I work, but it's okay.
The verb 'are' does not agree with the singular subject 'I'. The sentence is unclear; it is corrected to a meaningful statement with proper subject-verb agreement.
× I have good I have nice coworker and this place is very very interesting because we do very many cake and.
✓ I have good, nice coworkers and this place is very interesting because we make many cakes.
The sentence has repetition and incorrect plural forms. 'Coworker' should be plural 'coworkers'. 'Cake' should be plural 'cakes'. 'Do' is replaced with 'make' for correct collocation.
× I like my workplace because it is interesting and during the work we are already happy here and I like this.
✓ I like my workplace because it is interesting, and during work, we are happy here, and I like it.
The phrase 'during the work' is corrected to 'during work'. 'I like this' is vague; 'I like it' refers back to the workplace properly.
× My future plans I next work here and I do many interesting and different kind of desserts.
✓ My future plans are to continue working here and to make many interesting and different kinds of desserts.
The sentence lacks proper future tense structure. 'I next work here' is incorrect; it should be 'to continue working here'. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' to agree with 'different'.
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