工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences complete and clear, and avoid redundancy. For example, mention the company name clearly and your role, and express your feelings about the job in a natural way.

範例: I work as a software engineer at a company called This Place, which is located in the city center. I really enjoy my work because it challenges me and helps me grow professionally.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'center of a bundle' and some grammatical mistakes. Try to use clear and correct expressions, and connect your ideas smoothly using linking words.

範例: I work at a company called Lisa Bliss, which is located in the city center. I love working there because the neighborhood is pleasant, and my colleagues are very friendly and supportive.

建議: Your answer is generally good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and make your sentences more natural and concise.

範例: Yes, it is a great place to work mainly because of the positive environment. My boss is very friendly, and my colleagues are supportive, which makes my experience rewarding. Although I am unsure how long I will stay, I am currently enjoying my time there.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I love the place where I work because it is right next to a beautiful garden, which is very pleasant to look at and has a nice fragrance. Moreover, the workplace has many amenities, such as a nearby canteen and good facilities, which make it convenient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your future plans clearly and complete your sentences. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to explain your goals logically.

範例: In the future, I plan to focus on developing software that supports social and political initiatives. I want to create programs that help both people and the government by improving policies and services through technology.

× I really enjoying my work and I work as a software engineer over there.

✓ I really enjoy my work and I work as a software engineer over there.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in its base form after 'really' to form the present simple tense. Using 'enjoying' here is incorrect because it requires an auxiliary verb (e.g., 'am enjoying') to be correct.

× I work at a company called This Place which is situated at the central side of.

✓ I work at a company called This Place which is situated in the central area.

The phrase 'at the central side of' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct preposition to describe location within an area is 'in', and 'central area' is a more natural expression.

× I work at a company called Lisa Bliss, which is situated at the center of a bundle.

✓ I work at a company called Lisa Bliss, which is situated in the center of a building.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'in' is used to indicate location inside something. Also, 'bundle' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'building' fits the context better.

× I love working there because of the neighborhood and the people as well as the colleagues are very friendly.

✓ I love working there because of the neighborhood, the people, and the colleagues who are very friendly.

The original sentence is structurally incorrect due to the conjunction 'as well as' followed by 'are'. The correction separates the list and adds a relative clause for clarity.

× My boss is very friendly and amiable as well as my colleague are very supportive, so it's a rewarding experience for me.

✓ My boss is very friendly and amiable, and my colleagues are very supportive, so it's a rewarding experience for me.

The subject 'colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'as well as' is replaced with 'and' for better sentence flow.

× I don't know how much I will work there, but until now I am enjoying and having the most out of it.

✓ I don't know how long I will work there, but until now I have been enjoying and getting the most out of it.

The phrase 'until now' suggests a present perfect continuous tense ('have been enjoying'). Also, 'having the most out of it' is corrected to 'getting the most out of it' for natural expression.

× Yes, I love the place where I work because it is right next to the garden. It's it's very charming for me to look at and the smell is very nice over there.

✓ Yes, I love the place where I work because it is right next to the garden. It's very charming to look at, and the smell is very nice there.

The repeated 'It's it's' is a typo. Also, 'very charming for me to look at' is awkward; 'very charming to look at' is more natural. 'Over there' is simplified to 'there' for clarity.

× As well as the place has a lot of amenities into it.

✓ Also, the place has a lot of amenities.

The phrase 'amenities into it' is incorrect. 'Amenities' do not take the preposition 'into'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× I can just go right next to the canteen and it also have so many infrastructure as well as the facilities near.

✓ I can just go right next to the canteen, and it also has a lot of infrastructure as well as facilities nearby.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Infrastructure' is uncountable and 'a lot of' is used. 'Near' is corrected to 'nearby' as an adverb.

× I think I'll be engaged mostly on the special as well as a political side in my career.

✓ I think I'll be engaged mostly in the social as well as the political side of my career.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'engaged in' is the correct phrase. Also, 'special' is likely a mishearing of 'social'. 'A political side' is corrected to 'the political side' for specificity.

× I want to be focused on to developing plans and policies that will not only help people but also help the government.

✓ I want to focus on developing plans and policies that will not only help people but also help the government.

The phrase 'focused on to developing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'focus on developing' or 'be focused on developing'. The infinitive 'to' is unnecessary here.

× So being a software engineer, I tend to make software as well as making important contribution to my.

✓ So, as a software engineer, I tend to develop software as well as make important contributions to my field.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Being a software engineer' is better expressed as 'as a software engineer'. 'Make software' is corrected to 'develop software'. 'Making important contribution to my' is incomplete; 'make important contributions to my field' completes the thought.