工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó mới giải thích thêm. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I am currently a university student in my second year. Sometimes, I don't really enjoy studying and I feel like I want to start working soon.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I currently work part-time as a private tutor. I teach math to a sixth-grade student at his house.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I don't think it's a good place to work because I teach at the student's house, which is a private environment. I would prefer to work in a more open setting where I can interact with more people.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và thiếu mạch lạc. Hãy tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I don't really like the place where I work because I prefer an open environment. Working in a social setting allows me to interact with more people.

建議: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên.

範例: I have two future work plans. First, I want to become an English teacher, so I plan to get a high score in the IELTS exam. Second, I would like to work as an English tour guide.

× I am in two years student and at this time I sometimes I feel I am not really enjoy studying and I really want to go to work for.

✓ I am a second-year student and at this time I sometimes feel I do not really enjoy studying and I really want to go to work.

The phrase 'two years student' is incorrect; it should be 'a second-year student' to correctly express the duration and status. Also, 'I am not really enjoy' is incorrect because 'am' should be followed by a present participle or an adjective, so it should be 'I do not really enjoy'. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Currently I have a part time shop in tuition.

✓ Currently I have a part-time tutoring job.

The phrase 'shop in tuition' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'tutoring job' or 'part-time tutor'. 'Shop' is not used to describe a tutoring position, and 'in tuition' is not a proper prepositional phrase here.

× I teach math for a 6th grade student.

✓ I teach math to a 6th-grade student.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; it should be 'to' when indicating the recipient of teaching. Also, '6th grade' should be hyphenated as '6th-grade' when used as an adjective.

× I teach him at his house.

✓ I teach him at his house.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I don't think this is a good place to work because I work at his house and actually this is a private environment.

✓ I don't think this is a good place to work because I work at his house and actually this is a private environment.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I want to work in a open, more open environment, help me have more interact with society.

✓ I want to work in an open, more open environment that helps me interact more with society.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Help me have more interact' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me interact more'.

× I am not really I am not really into my place where I work because I prefer to open environment.

✓ I am not really into the place where I work because I prefer an open environment.

The phrase 'I am not really I am not really' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'my place where I work' is better expressed as 'the place where I work'. 'Prefer to open environment' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer an open environment' with the correct article.

× I feel working in a more open and social setting because it around me to interact with people and.

✓ I feel working in a more open and social setting allows me to interact with people around me.

The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect structure. 'Because it around me to interact' is incorrect; it should be 'allows me to interact with people around me' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Actually, I have to future work plans.

✓ Actually, I have two future work plans.

The word 'to' is incorrect here; it should be 'two' to indicate the number of plans.

× The first one is I want to become a teacher, a English teacher.

✓ The first one is I want to become a teacher, an English teacher.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an'. 'English' starts with a vowel sound, so 'an' is correct.

× I I will gain the IELTS exam examination and I get I really want to get high score and become a English teacher.

✓ I will take the IELTS exam and I really want to get a high score and become an English teacher.

'Gain the IELTS exam examination' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take the IELTS exam'. Also, 'get high score' needs an article: 'a high score'. 'a English teacher' should be 'an English teacher' due to vowel sound.

× The second plan is become a English guide tour.

✓ The second plan is to become an English tour guide.

The phrase 'become a English guide tour' is incorrect in word order and article usage. The correct phrase is 'become an English tour guide'.