工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容较丰富，表达了转专业的经历，语言自然流畅。但部分表达不够简洁，且“Beijing Normal Dash”可能是口误，应为“Beijing Normal University”。建议注意发音准确性和简洁表达。

範例: I'm currently a student at Beijing Normal University and Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in Cinema and Television. Initially, I studied accounting, but I realized my passion lies in film and theater, so I switched my major.

建議: 回答简洁明了，直接回应问题，语言自然。可以稍微丰富内容，使回答更完整。

範例: I don't work at the moment because I'm a full-time student focusing on my studies.

建議: 回答内容具体，表达了对学校工作人员的看法，但语法错误（Staffs应为Staff），口语填充词较多，影响流畅度。建议减少口语填充词，注意单复数形式。

範例: If you mean my school, I think it's a great place to work because the staff are energetic, creative, and passionate about their jobs.

建議: 回答直接且诚实，但较为简短。可以适当扩展，表达对未来工作的期待或态度，使回答更丰富。

範例: Actually, I don't work now since I'm a senior student, but I hope to find a workplace that is inspiring and supportive in the future.

建議: 回答表达了未来职业目标，但有重复词汇（to to），口语填充词较多，语法和表达不够准确。建议减少填充词，注意语法，表达更流畅。

範例: I have always dreamed of becoming a creative producer, so I plan to work hard and secure an internship during my master's degree to gain relevant experience.

× the Staffs in our school are really energetic

✓ the staff in our school are really energetic

“Staff”作为集合名词，表示全体员工时通常用单数形式，不加复数-s。这里用“Staffs”是错误的，应改为“staff”。