工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to form complete sentences with correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: I am a university student studying management because I find it very interesting. I attend a reputed university where I am learning valuable skills for my future career.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and explain your work situation with correct grammar and linking words.

範例: I work from home as a tutor because it allows me to manage my time effectively and help students in a comfortable environment.

建議: Your answer is short and lacks supporting details. Try to explain why you think it is a good place to work using linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because it is quiet and convenient, which helps me focus better on my tutoring sessions.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is repetitive. Use correct verb forms and add reasons to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is comfortable and I can organize my schedule easily.

建議: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar to express your plans clearly.

範例: My future work plan is to complete my graduation first. After that, I want to pursue a master's degree in management because higher education will help me develop more skills for my career.

× I am a student study in university.

✓ I am a student studying at university.

The original sentence lacks proper verb form and preposition. 'Study' should be in the '-ing' form to describe ongoing action, and 'in university' should be 'at university' to indicate location correctly.

× I study in a reputed university.

✓ I study at a reputed university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending an institution; 'at' is the correct preposition to use with 'university'.

× I studied.

✓ (Sentence unnecessary and incomplete; can be removed or completed as 'I studied management.')

The sentence 'I studied.' is incomplete and lacks context. It should be either removed or completed to convey a clear meaning.

× I studying management.

✓ I am studying management.

The verb 'studying' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly.

× I choose because I think management seems like interesting for me.

✓ I chose it because I think management seems interesting to me.

The verb tense should be past tense 'chose' to match the context. 'Seems like interesting' is incorrect; it should be 'seems interesting'. Also, 'for me' should be 'to me' for correct expression.

× I work from home because I gives because I am a tutor.

✓ I work from home because I am a tutor.

The phrase 'I gives because' is incorrect and redundant. The correct sentence is 'I work from home because I am a tutor.'

× I work from home because I gives because I am a tutor.

✓ (Corrected in previous sentence)

The verb 'gives' is incorrectly used with the subject 'I'. It should be 'give' if used, but the phrase is unnecessary here.

× Yes, I think its a good place to work for me.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to work for me.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) is missing an apostrophe, which is necessary for correct grammar.

× Yes, I like the place where I'm work.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work.

The phrase 'I'm work' is incorrect; it should be 'I work' to match subject and verb correctly.

× My future work plan I want to completed my graduation after completing my graduation, I want to do my masters degree in management because.

✓ My future work plan is to complete my graduation. After completing my graduation, I want to do my master's degree in management because...

The sentence lacks proper structure and verb forms. 'I want to completed' should be 'I want to complete'. Also, 'masters degree' should be 'master's degree'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished.

× More education gives me more skill.

✓ More education gives me more skills.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to correctly express the idea of multiple abilities gained through education.