工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は少し冗長で、文のつながりが不自然です。より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を適切に使って論理的に話しましょう。

範例: I work at a prestigious Japanese news agency. I often conduct interviews with specialists, so I usually visit universities and institutions.

建議: 答えは明確ですが、少し繰り返しがあり、より自然な表現に改善できます。接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

範例: I work in central Tokyo, which is about 20 minutes by train from my home, so I can get to work quickly.

建議: 内容は良いですが、「respectful people」は不自然です。「respected people」や「experts」など適切な語彙を使いましょう。また、文のつながりを改善してください。

範例: Yes, my company is a good place to work because I am surrounded by many experts in social issues, politics, and science and technology.

建議: 文法ミスや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「frequent Japanese」は意味が不明瞭です。より正確で自然な表現を使い、文を簡潔にしましょう。

範例: I believe my company is the best place for me, but recently we have faced challenges, such as competition from artificial intelligence that can write Japanese articles.

建議: 文法の誤り（"sale of paper newspaper in decreased"）があります。正しい文法を使い、より具体的な内容を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: I want to continue working in my profession as long as possible, but news agencies face challenges because sales of paper newspapers have decreased in recent years.

× I always contact interviews, especially for specialists, so I usually go to universities and institutions.

✓ I always conduct interviews, especially with specialists, so I usually go to universities and institutions.

The verb 'contact' is incorrectly used with 'interviews'. The correct verb is 'conduct' when referring to carrying out interviews. 'Contact' is used for reaching out to people, not for the act of interviewing.

× I work in central Tokyo.

✓ I work in central Tokyo.

This sentence is correct. 'In' is the appropriate preposition to indicate working within a city area.

× It takes about 20 minutes by a train from my home, so it is not very far and I can go to my company quickly.

✓ It takes about 20 minutes by train from my home, so it is not very far and I can get to my company quickly.

The phrase 'by a train' is incorrect; the article 'a' should be omitted when referring to transportation modes generally. Also, 'go to my company' is better expressed as 'get to my company' to indicate arriving at a destination.

× Yes, my company is a suitable workplace for me because there are many specialists about social problems, politics or science and technology, so I am surrounded by many respectful people.

✓ Yes, my company is a suitable workplace for me because there are many specialists in social problems, politics, or science and technology, so I am surrounded by many respectful people.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to areas of expertise or fields.

× I am surrounded by many respectful people.

✓ I am surrounded by many respectable people.

'Respectful' means showing respect to others, while 'respectable' means deserving respect. The intended meaning is that the people are worthy of respect, so 'respectable' is correct.

× I believe that my company is the best workplace for me, but recently we face quite a difficult challenges, that is the competition with artificial intelligence as it can write frequent Japanese.

✓ I believe that my company is the best workplace for me, but recently we face quite difficult challenges, that is the competition with artificial intelligence as it can write fluent Japanese.

The phrase 'a difficult challenges' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly; it should be 'difficult challenges' without 'a'. Also, 'frequent Japanese' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fluent' to describe language proficiency.

× I want to continue my profession as long as possible, but news agencies face a challenging situation because the sale of paper newspaper in decreased in recent years.

✓ I want to continue my profession as long as possible, but news agencies face a challenging situation because the sale of paper newspapers has decreased in recent years.

The phrase 'sale of paper newspaper in decreased' contains errors: 'newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' to match 'sale', and 'in decreased' is incorrect; the present perfect tense 'has decreased' is appropriate to indicate a change over recent years.