工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，'Bachelor degree'应为'Bachelor's degree'，且句子结构不够自然。建议简洁明了地表达毕业状态，并使用正确的词汇和语法。

範例: I have just graduated from university with a Bachelor's degree.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'quietly forcing on my studios time'不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用简单明了的句子表达当前不工作的状态及原因。

範例: I am not working at the moment because I am focusing on my studies.

建議: 回答没有直接回应问题，缺乏内容和细节。建议直接说明自己目前没有工作，并简要解释原因。

範例: I don't have a job right now, so I can't say if it's a good place to work.

建議: 回答不清晰，语法和表达错误较多，难以理解。建议明确表达对理想工作环境的看法，并使用连贯的句子。

範例: Yes, I would like my workplace because having clear plans helps me stay organized.

建議: 回答基本清楚，但语法有误，如'I want study'应为'I want to study'。建议使用完整正确的句子表达未来计划。

範例: I want to continue studying in the future and plan to pursue a master's degree.

× I just graduated from university and completed my degree Bachelor degree.

✓ I just graduated from university and completed my Bachelor's degree.

这里“Bachelor degree”缺少所有格形式，正确表达应为“Bachelor's degree”，表示学士学位。

× Oh I don't work at the moment because I'm quietly forcing on my studios time.

✓ Oh I don't work at the moment because I'm quietly focusing on my studies.

“forcing on my studios time”是错误搭配，应为“focusing on my studies”，表示专注于学习。

× Sorry I don't have work now.

✓ Sorry, I don't have a job now.

“have work”表达不准确，通常用“have a job”表示有工作。

× Yes I can because I think make a plans it can help us clear.

✓ Yes, I can, because I think making plans can help us be clear.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性，应调整为“making plans can help us be clear”，使句子通顺且语法正确。

× I want study in the future and I'm planning to study for my masters degree.

✓ I want to study in the future and I'm planning to study for my master's degree.

“want”后应接不定式“to study”，且“masters degree”应为所有格“master's degree”。