工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法不准确，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题并用简单句清晰表达身份，例如“I am a stay-at-home mom and I take care of my children.”

範例: I am a stay-at-home mom and I take care of my children every day.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误。建议完整表达地点并避免句子未完成，例如“I work at home in a small apartment.”

範例: I work at home in a small apartment where I take care of my family.

建議: 回答过于简短，缺少具体理由。建议补充原因，使回答更丰富和连贯，例如“It's a good place because it's quiet and comfortable.”

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because it is quiet and comfortable.

建議: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达愿望并说明原因，例如“I would like a bigger house because I can spend time there when my children are at school.”

範例: I would like to work in a bigger house because I can spend my time there while my children are at school.

建議: 句子结构混乱，表达不流畅。建议用简单句表达担忧和现状，例如“I have been a mother at home for three years, so I am afraid to find a job now.”

範例: I have been a stay-at-home mom for three years, so I feel afraid to look for a job now.

× Neither or not I am a stay at home mom.

✓ Neither, I am a stay-at-home mom.

句中使用了错误的连词“or not”，应使用“Neither”单独表达否定含义。建议去掉“or not”，使句子更通顺。

× I work in my house, it's a small apartment and.

✓ I work in my house; it's a small apartment.

句末多余的连词“and”导致句子不完整，应去掉。并用分号连接两个相关句子，使表达更清晰。

× No, I wanted a big house to work because it's can spend the my time during my children go to school.

✓ No, I want a big house to work because I can spend my time while my children go to school.

“wanted”时态错误，应使用现在时“want”；“it's can”结构错误，应改为“I can”；“the my time”中“the”多余，应去掉；“during my children go to school”应改为“while my children go to school”，更符合表达习惯。

× I have no idea about my future work because I have three years at home just as a mother, so I have I afraid to find a job.

✓ I have no idea about my future work because I have been at home for three years just as a mother, so I am afraid to find a job.

“have three years at home”时态和表达不正确，应使用现在完成进行时“have been at home for three years”；“I have I afraid”结构错误，应改为“I am afraid”。