工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'an International School' nên là 'at an International School', 'student' nên số nhiều 'students', 'improve also' nên đảo lại thành 'also improve'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng giới từ đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I'm not a student anymore; I am currently working as a teaching assistant at an International School. I really enjoy working there because it allows me to support my students in their learning and also improve my communication skills.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đầy đủ ý nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh (ví dụ: 'so is save me' nên là 'so it saves me', câu 'because. People here...' bị ngắt quãng). Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và chính xác hơn.

範例: I'm currently working at an International School which is very close to my house, so it saves me a lot of time on commuting. I really enjoy working there because the people are very friendly, and I get to interact with students as well as colleagues from different countries.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh (ví dụ: 'several a lot of advantages' không đúng, câu 'I can get to. Make a lot of friends...' bị ngắt quãng). Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, it is a very good place to work. It has many advantages for me. First of all, it is near my house, so it's quite convenient for me to travel. Also, because it is an international environment, I can make many friends from different countries.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngắt câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'Dear' không phù hợp, câu 'on my. Families' và 'treat. To employees' bị ngắt quãng). Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu và sử dụng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really love this place. If there is any job vacancy at this school, I would definitely recommend it to my friends and family because the school treats its employees very well and has good policies.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'could lie' nên là 'would like', 'IO iOS cause' có thể là 'IELTS course', 'tassel costs' có thể là 'TESOL course'). Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, đồng thời tránh ngắt quãng câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

範例: In the future, I would like to become an English teacher. That is why I am taking the IELTS course to improve my English. Also, I plan to take the TESOL course so that I can be qualified and improve my teaching skills.

× I'm now working as a teaching assistant and International School.

✓ I'm now working as a teaching assistant at an International School.

The preposition 'at' is used to indicate the place of work. 'And' is incorrect here because it suggests two roles or places, but the intended meaning is working at a specific place.

× I really love working there because it allows me to support my student in their learning an improve also my communication skills.

✓ I really love working there because it allows me to support my students in their learning and also improve my communication skills.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'their learning'. Also, 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to connect the two verbs.

× I'm currently working at an International School which is very close to my house so is save me a lot of time on commuting.

✓ I'm currently working at an International School which is very close to my house so it saves me a lot of time on commuting.

The phrase 'so is save me' is incorrect; it should be 'so it saves me' to correctly use the subject 'it' and the verb in third person singular form.

× I really enjoy working there because. People here are very friendly and I can get to interact with students and also my colleagues from different country as well.

✓ I really enjoy working there because people here are very friendly and I can interact with students and also my colleagues from different countries.

The period after 'because' is incorrect; the sentence should continue. 'Get to interact' is better as 'interact' for clarity. 'Different country' should be plural 'different countries'.

× Yes, indeed it is very good place to work.

✓ Yes, indeed it is a very good place to work.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very good place' to correctly indicate a singular countable noun.

× It has several a lot of advantages to me.

✓ It has a lot of advantages for me.

'Several' and 'a lot of' should not be used together. Also, 'to me' should be 'for me' to indicate benefit.

× First of all is near my house, so it's quite convenient for me to travel and also because as an international environment I can get to. Make a lot of friends from peoples from with people from different country.

✓ First of all, it is near my house, so it's quite convenient for me to travel. Also, because it is an international environment, I can make a lot of friends with people from different countries.

The sentence was fragmented and had incorrect prepositions. 'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural. 'From with people' is redundant; 'with people' is correct. 'Different country' should be plural 'different countries'.

× Dear I do love this place so if there is any job vacancy in this school I would like to recommend it to my friends on my. Families because the company here I mean the school treat. To employees quite well with good policies.

✓ Dear, I do love this place, so if there is any job vacancy in this school, I would like to recommend it to my friends and my family because the company here, I mean the school, treats employees quite well with good policies.

'On my families' is incorrect; it should be 'and my family'. 'Treat' should be 'treats' to agree with singular subject 'school'. The sentence was fragmented and needed commas for clarity.

× In the future, I could lie to become an English teacher.

✓ In the future, I would like to become an English teacher.

'Could lie' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'would like' to express desire.

× That is the reason why we're taking the IO iOS cause to improve my. English and also in the future I would like to have the tassel costs too so that I can be qualified. Is my teaching skills too.

✓ That is the reason why I'm taking the IELTS course to improve my English, and also in the future, I would like to have the TESOL course so that I can be qualified in my teaching skills too.

'We're taking' should be 'I'm taking' to match singular subject. 'IO iOS cause' is a misspelling of 'IELTS course'. 'Tassel costs' should be 'TESOL course'. 'Is my teaching skills' is incorrect; it should be 'in my teaching skills'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring.