工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，信息表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达身份和专业，避免语法错误。

範例: I used to work as a biological research assistant, but now I am a student at Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in the modernization of traditional Chinese medicine.

建議: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法错误较多，信息表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，简洁明了地说明工作地点和单位。

範例: I worked as a biological research assistant at the City of Advanced Technology, Chinese Academy of Science, located in Guangdong province, southern China.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，准确表达观点，并避免拼写错误。

範例: Yes, it was a good place to work because the environment was very professional and inspiring.

建議: 回答中语法错误和拼写错误影响表达效果。建议使用正确的语法结构，避免重复，表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I enjoyed working there because the environment was inspiring and professional.

建議: 表达不准确，词汇使用错误（interesting应为interested，purchase应为pursue），句子结构不完整。建议使用正确词汇，清晰表达未来计划。

範例: I am very interested in combining traditional knowledge with modern science, so I plan to pursue a PhD degree in this field.

× I used to work also Biological research assistant, but now I am a student at Hong Kong Baptist University and my major is Discovery, an modernization of Chinese traditional medicine.

✓ I used to work as a Biological Research Assistant, but now I am a student at Hong Kong Baptist University and my major is Discovery, a modernization of Chinese traditional medicine.

句中缺少介词“as”来表示职业身份，且“an modernization”中的冠词使用错误，应为“a modernization”。此外，“Biological research assistant”应首字母大写以符合专有名词格式。建议在表达职业时使用“work as + 职业名称”。

× Are you sure? Were also biological research assistant Ash Engine in City of Advanced Technology Chinese Academy of Science, which is located in Guangdong province in the South of China.

✓ I was also a Biological Research Assistant at Ash Engine in the City of Advanced Technology, Chinese Academy of Science, which is located in Guangdong province in the south of China.

句子结构混乱，时态错误（“Were”应为“I was”），缺少冠词“a”，地名和机构名称应大写。建议使用完整的主谓结构，时态与上下文保持一致。

× Yes, the environment there was very professional and inspire E.

✓ Yes, the environment there was very professional and inspiring.

“inspire E”拼写错误，应为形容词形式“inspiring”来修饰环境。形容词形式用于描述名词的特征。

× Yes, I enjoyed the place I work. Becauses the environment there it was very inspiring and professional.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed the place where I worked because the environment there was very inspiring and professional.

句子中“Becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”，且时态应与上下文一致，使用过去时“worked”。“there it was”结构重复，应简化为“there was”。

× I am very interesting in combining traditional knowledge and modern science, so I am going to purchase a PhD degree in this real.

✓ I am very interested in combining traditional knowledge and modern science, so I am going to pursue a PhD degree in this field.

“interesting”是形容词，表示“有趣的”，应使用过去分词“interested”表示“感兴趣的”。“purchase a PhD degree”用词错误，应为“pursue a PhD degree”表示“攻读博士学位”。“real”应为“field”，表示领域。